Review Detail of Eom in Invincible System in ATG (Hiatus)
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Every thing was good until MC accepted Cang yue's confession, I mean it was so unnecessary to accept that confession that I don't even wan't to read anymore he know that jasmine liked him but he still accepted her confession was really cringe I mean she not worthy of MC no matter who say I am not going to accept that she is just going to be MC's pet that need to feed cultivation resources and have S** with and thats it I think author really made a bad decision to accept her as first harem member so I just want to say author thanks until this time with that move you did there every thing over for me(you know I read so many atgs fanfics so I can see future direction of your story in atg universe so with turn you did here harem of this story made story over for me). Because of language barrier I can't express what I have in my mind so if the things I write here is heavy sorry fo that.
Invincible System in ATG (Hiatus)
Charan56
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I've read the original novel long back. And her character was something that made me ponder over it for many days. I understand, she isn't right for the MC. But what if she is independent and follows him? And about her confession, one thing I want to emphasize is that Jasmine isn't of the age to start a relationship with MC. And their feelings weren't deepened in the first place. I planned a lot for it and I intend to take it slow. As for Cang Yue, she is the only woman I can put in MC's harem, who is normal. She isn't cold or flaunts her pride onto others. I wanted to explore her character in this one. It's understandable that many dislike her character, to be exact, don't think her worthy enough. But from my standpoint, she is very much needed in the story. Initially, I didn't want to put any spoilers hoping to keep it as a surprise, but as many as siding with your review, I had to answer it.
Charan56:I've read the original novel long back. And her character was something that made me ponder over it for many days. I understand, she isn't right for the MC. But what if she is independent and follows him? And about her confession, one thing I want to emphasize is that Jasmine isn't of the age to start a relationship with MC. And their feelings weren't deepened in the first place. I planned a lot for it and I intend to take it slow. As for Cang Yue, she is the only woman I can put in MC's harem, who is normal. She isn't cold or flaunts her pride onto others. I wanted to explore her character in this one. It's understandable that many dislike her character, to be exact, don't think her worthy enough. But from my standpoint, she is very much needed in the story. Initially, I didn't want to put any spoilers hoping to keep it as a surprise, but as many as siding with your review, I had to answer it.
