Review Detail of creepycatisawesone in Invincible System in ATG (Hiatus)

Well You can read the other reviews and you would get the idea. Simply Said. This is the best ATG Fanfic out there. I have read many of them. But this is truly the best. So what is better than the other ones?? Writing Quality ... The story is written in proper english, No shitty grammatical errors. No He/She errors. Perfect but easy to understand word flow. The flow is so well, I didn't even realise when I covered all the chapters.( and for the haters... It's was not because of words. Each chapter had at least 1500-2000 words for sure but I didn't count) Character Design is actually the best part as the Yun Che of the story is the best ever. Each character acts the way you would expect them to act actually if that event would have happened. System too is good as it is a system of the person and the person is not a slave of the system. There are no penalties. Quests are given but are for the benefit of Yun Che himself and he is not forced to accept them. He can refuse them. The shop part is very funny. But it's a secret for you. Next ... Well there are more points but I gotta go. So I recommend the story to any and everyone . C YA