ssun_ara
Unique plot. Love the mysteries and how big of an influence the academy seems to have but with a few knowing about it. Some grammatical errors but so little that the story still flaws exquisitely. Still early chapters but the world building is great together with the characters. I hope you keep it up.
Geezz!! I really like this one. From the beginning, there was a clear and unique explanation about ML. A very unique name, the people's ability is just unusual. I always thought a peculiar human being is cool but this is just like what we had in daily life got escalated. Amazing. Idk anymore I really like this <3
I really am fascinated about the concept. It's really amazing. Definitely will save this in my library! There are a few points that I'd like to point out. Those are switching of tenses and "Showing" & "Telling" techniques. In the synopsis and chapters, the tenses switches. You also want to show the details of how surprised Krei was, how annoyed she was (using facial expressions) and the like. There are some points that you added these descriptions. You done a good job to those parts! Kudos for the author!