The author did a very good job with the story, despite its main focus being a romance, the action scene depicted is wonderfully written and paint a clear image in my mind. The pacing is fast, and the story is direct and to the point. I can assure anyone who stumbles upon this story to give it a try. Keep up the good work! :D

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Once chapters in and I can see how great this story is already, Keep up the good work!

With only the first paragraph, I manage to see the situation depicted clearly, Great Scene . :D

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The Author knows their way with the words, and it's clearly shown as soon as I read the first paragraph. Though I usually don't usually prefer a full romantic/drama story, It is clear to see that the author did a very good job conveying the emotion of each scene. I could feel the situation of the main character and it hit quite close to home in the early chapter, which is a good thing as it means the author convey the emotion well enough for the reader to empathize. Keep up the good work, you did a great job!

Thank you very much! I appreciate your review a lot, I hope you enjoy the story, I will be posting more chapters every day.

This is the author of this story (Teehee) giving himself a shameless five star. I want to express my gratitude toward everyone who took interest in this story I write. I originally write this one on a whim, but I found great enjoyment in reading and editing this story, and I want to share it with everyone :D . I will be occasionally checking, I'm active most of the time so feel free to leave any comment, I appreciate any support and criticism that would help me improve upon my future work. The performance of this story will directly affect my future work and life, as this would be the first novel I decide to commit to it as it is and not retconned things (I must apologize for those who follow my other work which has been cancelled, I'm still working on the final draft, I can't thank you enough for the support you gave me.). So please, If you have fun with the story are want me to make more, please support me by simply adding it to your library, and I will appreciate any review, comment and power stone. For I truly wish to be able to pursue and sustain my writing and art career, every support from you mean a lot to me. Lastly, I hope you enjoy this story I wrote, I will be posting at least one chapter a day for now. Thank you, everyone!

One chapter in and I'm interested to learn more about what this little psycho would do next. Though I see many mistakes and Typo, I try not to hold that against the author too much. The premise of the story is fascinating and make me wish to learn more about how the story will go. Keep up the good work!

The humour is on point and the story move on at a fast pace. Though I normally don't prefer this type of paragraph and dialogue formatting, I still find it easy to understand. The author did a very good job conveying the event. I will be sure to read more of this story.

Poetic and written so well that I'm jealous of the writer able to convey feeling through the use of words. I'm usually not a big fan of this kind of story, but the writer did a very good job and manage to make me want to see where the story will go. I will continue to read this story when I have time. Please keep on the good work.

The story is only getting started and I'm very interested to see more of it. in the future. The premise seems solids and well thought out, though at this moment that I make this review there are only two chapters, there's still a lot to be revealed about the world.

A quick note from the author here! Many cities in the story have the word "buri" at the end of their name for example -> Sophanburi. the word buri simply means a city, so Sophan city is interchangeable with Sophanburi. this will be the case for other city with the word buri in the end, I avoid using both word 'buri' and the word 'city' at the same time for immersion.

Yes, he will be the main character in the third story [Wind of Change] which is coming soon after the [Rising Dawn] story progress further. please. I will notify the coming of that story at the end of the chapter in [Rising Dawn] that start [Wind of Change], similar to how [Rising Dawn] chapter ten start [Red Sun] Thank you for reading and I'm glad that you like my story! have a good day!

This story has a very well compact yet detailed description of what's going on that paint a clear picture in the reader mind. Currently, when I give this a review it's only one chapter and I'm hooked by the introduction alone. now I'm curious about what will happen next in the story...

Mayongchid is a small fruit resembling very small mangoes with yellow skin. it a sweet tasted and have orangish-yellow meat. They are common all over the tropical regions.

Hello, it's the author here! I hope you enjoy my epic tales. I try my best to deliver this ambitious project, and as I spend my time writing and meet other writers I realized I still have a lot to learn. English is my second language and my grammar is not the best and my choice of words can be strange. There are so much I want to show everyone but can't be described properly in words and many more thing I struggle with. I want to improve myself, to be able to tell stories better than before. I can constantly re-edit any mistake I notice for I want this to be a story that the reader can enjoy reading as much as the author enjoy telling this story. Please feel free to point out any mistake I made and I will try my best to fix it or clarify my intention. But overall, I just want to thank you for giving my story a chance. all your support means a lot to me and I will continue to work hard and achieve my dream of writing epic tales that will be adapted in the future, while also provide you with good entertainment. Thank you very much! I hope you have fun and have a good day!

Praya is a respected title, meaning something along the line "Greater lord". This is a noble rank for a minister, ruler of a city or other high rankings noble that receive a special name from their overlord.

I have changed the Paragraph entirely to be more clear with the situation, Please check it out. thank you