Reviews of I Was a Royal Mistake!

One chapter in, and I'm quite interested actually! I like the dialogue, it moves at a good pace, and I'm sure this was intentional but I'm not a fan of the king at all!

The story progresses quite well in just a few brief chapters; however this is at the cost of character development--other than the brief mention of the family trait of silver hair and red eyes they were all left virtually blank for lack of description. The same is true for world development. Because time progressed so quickly, and we jumped from scene to scene through it there was very little to distinguish the world at all around them. The only rule seemed to be that the king felt women tiresome, useless, and just did not like them--to the point he was cruel to his own wife and daughter. I do however enjoy imagining a man forced to reincarnate into a baby girl's body. It will be interesting to see how he/she survives and (hopefully) wins the king over.

I definitely love the fresh Idea of a man stuck inside a woman's body, it keeps the story exciting and how will the protagonist act in the future. Updates have no problem and is consistent. It has a straight forward story development which gradually improves over time and I'm a fan of medieval/fantasy settings. I will keep on reading!

I really enjoyed this book, it has a very nice feel to it and really stress on the degradation of females as heirs to thrones. it's a beautiful story that has a lot of advancement potential and i hope you continue it.

There are two chapters so fat, so I can't quite decide if the story has a fast or slow pace, however, I will still rate the category with five stars. As for the writing quality, I didn't see any misspelled words. The plot seems interesting even with only two chapters. The writing style is vivid, and hopefully you keep the consistency throughout future chapters. Keep up the good work author!!!

Well, the author wrote his vision of an old story about rebirth in another world. It starts like all old stories the same way, but maybe the author will be able to contribute something new to this idea? It would be interesting to see how it works out ?! It is difficult to objectively evaluate the work of the author in two chapters. But for now, I can say that the text block is very good. However, dialogs should be enclosed in quotation marks. It seems the story looks more entertaining than it first seemed. It remains to be hoped that the author will be able to complete his novel and not leave it in the middle of writing, as we unfortunately see in many promising stories on this site. Good luck to the author. I added your story to the library to see what happens in the sequel. Author, do not forget to indicate the number of updates per week. And also to attract the attention of the audience should choose a more interesting title page.

A good story Warning: R18↑ .