There are two chapters so fat, so I can't quite decide if the story has a fast or slow pace, however, I will still rate the category with five stars. As for the writing quality, I didn't see any misspelled words. The plot seems interesting even with only two chapters. The writing style is vivid, and hopefully you keep the consistency throughout future chapters. Keep up the good work author!!!
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