Review Detail of Gourmet_DAO in I Was a Royal Mistake!

Well, the author wrote his vision of an old story about rebirth in another world. It starts like all old stories the same way, but maybe the author will be able to contribute something new to this idea? It would be interesting to see how it works out ?! It is difficult to objectively evaluate the work of the author in two chapters. But for now, I can say that the text block is very good. However, dialogs should be enclosed in quotation marks. It seems the story looks more entertaining than it first seemed. It remains to be hoped that the author will be able to complete his novel and not leave it in the middle of writing, as we unfortunately see in many promising stories on this site. Good luck to the author. I added your story to the library to see what happens in the sequel. Author, do not forget to indicate the number of updates per week. And also to attract the attention of the audience should choose a more interesting title page.