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Review Detail of Vera_Anne_Wolf in I Was a Royal Mistake!

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The story progresses quite well in just a few brief chapters; however this is at the cost of character development--other than the brief mention of the family trait of silver hair and red eyes they were all left virtually blank for lack of description. The same is true for world development. Because time progressed so quickly, and we jumped from scene to scene through it there was very little to distinguish the world at all around them. The only rule seemed to be that the king felt women tiresome, useless, and just did not like them--to the point he was cruel to his own wife and daughter. I do however enjoy imagining a man forced to reincarnate into a baby girl's body. It will be interesting to see how he/she survives and (hopefully) wins the king over.

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I Was a Royal Mistake!

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I understand your point, especially on the character development, I'm still new on that part so I'll probably be lacking in that part for a bit longer but rest assured that I'm trying to improve it by reviewing other materials. As for the world development, information is left intentionally at least until chapter 3, my fault since there are only 2 chapters as of now hahaha. I really appreciate the honest feedback, thanks!!