Shadow_Magus
This is a nice bk, still too short to say anything concrete. But it's unique and interesting, if you like System's then it's probably for you. The only "negative" point that come's to mind, are the "short" chapter's. But the update rate is daily, so it's not a problem. The grammar is okay too, not perfect, but you don't need to read a sentence 10 time's to understand it. But there are mistake's, small one's, but they exist. But not stupid stuff like, he/she/her/him, and if, i didn't see it and it probably was a 1 time thing. Im not gonna talk about the content of bk itself, you should form your own opinion and not get influenced by reviews too much. I think it's self-explanatory what this story is about. I just wish this book had 100 chapter's already, but no, i needed to find this while it had 20 chapter's only...Anyway, i hope the Author doesn't drop this, and good luck!
This is the first time I read something like this. I thought, hey, isn't this one of those niche? But damn, it's a lot more different. and that makes me so curious and anxious, like what next? Would the system guys pay him obedience or will they revolt against him later on? I'm seriously curious and also, I'm wondering how long does he want to exist like that? Then again, I like the fact he seems godlike but yet he is not OP himself. He's just a stragglers trying to survive, growing from weak to strong too. lol. it's a nice read. come join me
So this is a good book and I am looking foward to how the mc grows mentally as this is part that many books miss and the mc just get repetitive and annoying. I would also like to ask if you can add a character with the name Sena or have Sena somewhere inthe story? I’ve only hadn by one person do it before and i want to spread my name like a virus just cause I think its funny. Once again thank you for such a good book and hope you finish it with lots of chapters.
Pretty short story so far so not much to comment on. Writing Quality (4.5/5 --> Rounds up to 5/5): There are slight grammatical mistakes, but there is nothing that impedes with my understanding of the storyline. Stability of Updates (5/5): Not much to say. Story Development (4/5): I would honestly say that the beginning was a bit too repetitive in terms of how he wished he could have done differently or didn't live as boring of a life. I would have preferred to jump in the action so that it would have hooked me a bittt more, but this is mostly personal preference. Character Design (5/5): Lots of details sprinkled throughout. World Background (5): Many descriptions that help set the tone. Overall, good job!
The first two chaps were interesting, to say the least, It's an interesting book where the mc himself is a system. It's interesting seeing how the mc grows from what he was in chapter 3 and so on, and how he would interact with his host. There are a few grammatical mistakes here and there in the beginning but that disappeared once his book got to the good parts. The only thing I would say I had a problem with was the repetitive beginning but that's not a problem anymore. The world-building is great, he gives a lot of details to help the reader understand. Can't believe he isn't pro yet,
I love the idea of beeing on the systems side of story development!!! at the same time I think there is much more potential to it. it's like a dungeon novel mostly writing about the adventurers. not the Dungeon/System itself. (sorry if I get understood as a Bulli:) - I know beeing an author is hard work, but only asking for good reviews and soft critic is also really hard on the readers.