Review Detail of Cultreevation in I am System

I love the idea of beeing on the systems side of story development!!! at the same time I think there is much more potential to it. it's like a dungeon novel mostly writing about the adventurers. not the Dungeon/System itself. (sorry if I get understood as a Bulli:) - I know beeing an author is hard work, but only asking for good reviews and soft critic is also really hard on the readers.