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Review Detail of Kokushibou in I am System

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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv43yrKokushibou

This is a nice bk, still too short to say anything concrete. But it's unique and interesting, if you like System's then it's probably for you. The only "negative" point that come's to mind, are the "short" chapter's. But the update rate is daily, so it's not a problem. The grammar is okay too, not perfect, but you don't need to read a sentence 10 time's to understand it. But there are mistake's, small one's, but they exist. But not stupid stuff like, he/she/her/him, and if, i didn't see it and it probably was a 1 time thing. Im not gonna talk about the content of bk itself, you should form your own opinion and not get influenced by reviews too much. I think it's self-explanatory what this story is about. I just wish this book had 100 chapter's already, but no, i needed to find this while it had 20 chapter's only...Anyway, i hope the Author doesn't drop this, and good luck!

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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4Kokushibou

Another thing i think is a little negative, is that the world isn't properly explained, atleast so far. Like what is the power-scaling/ranking, why are the Kingdom's having war? How many Kingdom's exist, when did these God's start blessing people and how did people react. Well, these thing's get probably explained in the future. It's still just 20 chapter's in, but i hope it's explained in the bk itself. Not in the Author's comment, or in the comment's down below.

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusAuthorShadow_Magus

Thank you. I don't intend on dropping it, but as I stated on my other novels, I will be going out of town, and my exams are starting on 9th Jan, so I will be pausing everything for a while

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusAuthorShadow_Magus

Ya, so no explanations. Things will unveil themselves in the story. Imagine seeing 12 different anime based in the same world. That will be this novel, with all of these stories interlinked through one main story of Jack. No explainations, but if people ask, then I will give breif explainiations, unless it is important to the plot, at which point I will just say 'No Spoilers'. Sorry for wrong english, I'm tired after writting 3 chapters in one day and my finger jstu commited suidice.

Kokushibou:Another thing i think is a little negative, is that the world isn't properly explained, atleast so far. Like what is the power-scaling/ranking, why are the Kingdom's having war? How many Kingdom's exist, when did these God's start blessing people and how did people react. Well, these thing's get probably explained in the future. It's still just 20 chapter's in, but i hope it's explained in the bk itself. Not in the Author's comment, or in the comment's down below.
Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4Kokushibou

Yeah, i know. Just read my comment again, i know that it's probably gonna be explained.

Shadow_Magus:Ya, so no explanations. Things will unveil themselves in the story. Imagine seeing 12 different anime based in the same world. That will be this novel, with all of these stories interlinked through one main story of Jack. No explainations, but if people ask, then I will give breif explainiations, unless it is important to the plot, at which point I will just say 'No Spoilers'. Sorry for wrong english, I'm tired after writting 3 chapters in one day and my finger jstu commited suidice.