Review Detail of Revamping12345 in I am System

The first two chaps were interesting, to say the least, It's an interesting book where the mc himself is a system. It's interesting seeing how the mc grows from what he was in chapter 3 and so on, and how he would interact with his host. There are a few grammatical mistakes here and there in the beginning but that disappeared once his book got to the good parts. The only thing I would say I had a problem with was the repetitive beginning but that's not a problem anymore. The world-building is great, he gives a lot of details to help the reader understand. Can't believe he isn't pro yet,