Reviews of I'm Subaru from Re:Zero
I'm Subaru from Re:Zero
HattoriDaichi
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*sigh* high expectations, a great and interesting start, pleasant interactions, thought and personality of the MC quite good and a little realistic, good plan where you wanted to lead the story, good writing, interesting mechanics on how you wanted the MC to be strengthened... Only to end up Ruining her and Shitting the whole story. I really feel sad for stories ruined in such a way, just for the author want a bit of plot or drama. With how good it was before *sigh*.
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so here we start okay, to be honest I haven't read this novel but from this title it's definitely interesting so don't disappoint the reader okay and don't HIATUS / drop this novel ok ?, so my suggestion is that the author needs to go crazy up chapters and lengthen words in 1 chapter if it can't be long, at most, make it 2 chapters per day so readers will be happy and will give you support so that's all, well, don't drop it okay! hah ... the important thing is to keep the spirit in making this novel goodbye!
SI-OC as subaru from Re:Zero with Solo Leveling Cheats and return from death. Grammar is crap, can't tell if characters a he or she, feels like an MTL. MC just simps the moment he seems Emelia, like why tho? Knowing the canon, just follow what happens after someone tries to Rob MC, I understand he wants to get stronger but even Subaru didn't need to be strong to become Emilia's friend or knight. MC could've just straight up waited for Emelia, asked Reinhard for help, went to slums to locate felt, and had Reinhardt deal with that vamp chick. Ezpz, I was cringing so hard when I heard MC declaring shit left and right like some sort of ******** Chunni. And what was he saying about not dying while fighting? Does it even matter if you die a few times? Sure your psyche will be a bit screwed but that's fine and all. I really cringe harder when MC declares shit like naruto or some other loud Shounen characters. TLDR MC Cringe chunni with knight syndrome, grammar is trash, updates are fine.
As a fanfic, I really liked this work and I recommend it to Re: Zero and solo leveling fans, but it doesn't have the quality of an original work like the fanfics at the top of the ranking. The story is relatively fast what I personally see as a good thing in a fanfic, I like it when they are fast because they are the ones that usually come to an end instead of being abandoned in the middle or reaching chapter 800 if there is no glimpse of the end of the story. The flaws of this fanfic are the launch schedule not so good and a little inconsistent and at times the story is not as engaging as it should be. The moments that should be special or dramatic end up being normal like any other because the author does not get too deep in the moment, he just says he "recovered the memories" instead of describing a dramatic moment where there is some flahsback, intense emotions and the MC reacting to new knowledge or things like that. In general I liked the fanfic and intend to continue reading, I personally believe that we shouldn't be too hard when choosing a fanfic to read, but we need to be honest when evaluating it because this is what will help the author to grow. So I must say that this fanfic is not one of the best and the author still has a lot to improve, even though I personally like it.
Se supone que tu personaje transmigro, mas no es subaru... entonces porque tiene exactamente el mismo comportamiento que el? No hay desarollo de personaje, es tonto hasta la muerte, los fics de re: zero por lo general tratan de entablar todo lo mas apegado a la historia original pero le dan sentido convenientemente el tuyo por el contrario es demasiado forzado amigo.. La idea de estar en rezero con nivelacion en solitario es buena pero chico no haces que sea como deberia... ademas ten encuenta esto amedida que sube de nivel el sistema lo ayuda a volverse mas racional e inteligente ( muchos dicen que lo vuelve frio pero no, lo vuelve menos tonto poreso es que se sube la estad de inteligencia almenos que tu sistema no lo tenga) asi que de un modo u otro cambia la forma en el que tu personaje interactua y le pongo 5 estrellas
