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iLustForSleep

iLustForSleep

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I need sleep

2020-03-18 JoinedAscension Island
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep9mth
    Posted

    Ran out of fics to read and thought "Why not make my own?" So yeah. My chapters as of now are very short since I'm still not used to writing stories but hopefully it gets longer and better in the future. Reviews and criticisms are appreciated.

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    Traversing Restaurant
    Anime & Comics · iLustForSleep
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep9mth
    Replied to neis_marko

    Sure. But I don't think im skilled enough to write such things (yet) so dw

    Ch 1 Unexpected, but welcomed?
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    Traversing Restaurant
    Anime & Comics · iLustForSleep
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep1yr
    Replied to HollowAX

    lmfao

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    The Guild of Gamers: The Supervillain
    Book&Literature · DarkWolfShiro
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Replied to LordAinzSama

    How so? They would literally know when they're in a Genjutsu when fighting against her.

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Replied to BrianGallacher7

    Ah yes, making a review even though you didn't read the story. You're literally judging a book by it's cover.

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    System Break
    Games · Skully
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Replied to Great_Young_Master

    Also, you're right about finding fics in WN because of boredom lol. I occasionally browse here for wish fulfillment because I ran out of fics to read @_@

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    Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece
    Anime & Comics · Your_host_HK
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Commented

    Question mark for questions.

    ' Jasmine, what is this potency!! '
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    Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece
    Anime & Comics · Your_host_HK
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Commented

    Are*

    ' Jasmine, what is the pros of this new physique! '
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    Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece
    Anime & Comics · Your_host_HK
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Commented

    ...And Garp or other character like Shanks wouldn't find that suspicious?

    That's right Shen Long decided to modified his body and face as Madara Uchiha. Currently he looked very similar to Madara's young self.
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    Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece
    Anime & Comics · Your_host_HK
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Commented

    >Has a basically omnipotent system >Doesn't have something that can reduce pain Ok

    Luffy felt a massive pain wash over his eyes, like someone is drawing something on his pupils by a hot needle. The pain continued for half an hour and finally the process was over.
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    Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece
    Anime & Comics · Your_host_HK
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Commented

    The end of the sentence should have an exclamation point to, you know, make it seem he was actually screaming.

    " Kid, wait there i am going beat the crap out of you. " Roared Garp but Luffy ran back to the village.
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    Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece
    Anime & Comics · Your_host_HK
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Commented

    POV: You have never felt the touch of a woman.

    After watching anime, i have reached at a conclusion that real life girls are trash compared to 2-D girls.
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    Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece
    Anime & Comics · Your_host_HK
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Commented

    And this kids, is an example what NOT to become in the future.

    Sorry for my late introduction, I'm Shen Long. An 80 years old bachelor. I don't have any relatives or friends, neither did i adopt any child. My current hobbies are reading manga, novel and fanfiction, watching anime and playing all types of mobile and desktop games.
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    Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece
    Anime & Comics · Your_host_HK
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Replied to Truth_hertz

    As expected of a Webnovel user, very insightful review.

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    Accidental Gamer Hero
    Anime & Comics · KnowingAutumn
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Replied to Granville4554

    havent read this in months but pretty sure it was Youjo Senki (it's good, would recommend)

    The receptionist bent down and cleans tears from his face, hugs him. "Forgive me. Onee-san didn't know that you had such a hard life. Don't worry, Onee-san will help you as much as she can!" she said to him while also hugging Tanya.
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    Random Jump`
    Anime & Comics · meatball_san
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Replied to Tipota

    and?

    "their were only two there in the first place" Zack said and they both just stared at each other for a while until the young girl finally came out of her stupor "what??!!!"
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    Multiverse transmigrator
    Anime & Comics · Cute_lama
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Replied to RvH

    Still, that shouldn't justify bad writing.

    "their were only two there in the first place" Zack said and they both just stared at each other for a while until the young girl finally came out of her stupor "what??!!!"
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    Multiverse transmigrator
    Anime & Comics · Cute_lama
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Replied to chaoticCatholic

    "he brain washes people with the will of fire" isn't it Hashirama who brainwashed everyone since he's the one who invented the will of fire? Hiruzen is merely a victim. "he is so evil that it's natural and such retard he literally let danzo walk over him" Then tell me what he should have done then? Hiruzen is old as ****, he was Hokage for like, 40 years? He did the best he could, but I admit, he could've done better. "he is no better orchrimaru and danzo because he let them go so the blood on his hands" First of all, English please. And second, why are you only blaming Hiruzen? What about Minato who could have stopped Danzo when he was Hokage? What about the other Sannins who could have stopped Orochimaru?

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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Replied to akasuna123

    hy·per·bo·le /hīˈpərbəlē/ noun exaggerated statements or claims not meant to be taken literally. Also, like I said earlier, I'm not a big fan of MHA, in fact, I even dislike it a bit, but this fic made me feel things that other mha fics couldn't.

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    Comet Across the Verses
    Anime & Comics · Zedkaku
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  • iLustForSleep
    iLustForSleep2yr
    Replied to akasuna123

    So?

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    Comet Across the Verses
    Anime & Comics · Zedkaku
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