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ok first you need to fix gender problem you have he/him is for Male and she/her for females. the next problem is this is way to rush ik you dont wanna change things in the story but you already did with adding the solo lvl part what your not really using the fact that he loves emilia for just no reason is a next problem you need a proper way to mix in solo with re:zero without rushing the story you dont need to drop this story but I think you need a bit more practice

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