Reviews of Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen

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I don't know how to properly say it but the characters feels bland and a little forced for some reason, like mc feels out of place and doesn't fit, it's like she's not an mc and she's not supposed to be there, hard to explain but the way it's written with how mediocre the mc is and on top of that mc doesn't do much it just feels weird and for me it made it barely readable, got to ch15 and couldn't continue any longer without getting bored out of my mind

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I dont know how a copy pasta story can be this well recieved its extremely boring. To all those that have read already HP this will be same story with a diffrent MC but nothing changes it has no butterfly effect or amything. Extremely boring and repetative. Nothing is original aand ir feels like im reading summary of HP from a diffrent perspective. Everything in this story that is done well is copied from Rowling so yeah this fanfic is bad imo.

Good writing and story development. Keep up the good work. Please don't drop the novel. MC is very well thought out and each new chapter leaves you wanting more. Constant updates which is always a plus

Bland, boring and unoriginal. If you want to reread the books but from the perspective of a background/extra student who doesnt manage to alter the original plot whatsoever then you will love reading this.

In the first few minutes the line "but you didn't saw it" was uttered, such a grave offence shall not be forgiven. Would not suggest reading, unless you are an uncultured pig the horrendous errors that lay within shall physically hurt you.

I like it, its very engaging and the updates come regularly. ...............................................................................................................................

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I like everything i read about this novel, good luck to the author and i hope that this novel can keep going and dont be dropped ....................................

nice take with a original female lead i like it please continue your good work its a bit refreshing from norm the lead is perfect for now, balanced pls keep it up and yes more chapters please also dont drop

I literally cant give anything other than 5 stars. My favorite novel on this site. The story is very interesting and well written; closely intertwined with the original too. It updates a lot, almost 2 chp everyday.

Greatly fun story. The OC MC brings a very interesting change to the story, without being a reincarnate. Looking forward to more! Wonder how far the story shall diverge in the future

I need more chocolate... chocolate... Superb. This is really a good fanfic. just arrived at chp 20, but now i'm completely bewitched. Thx Author for the Novel.

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This is probably my first review of a fan fiction, and as of reading up to chapter 331, this is the best Harry Potter fanfiction that I've come across so far. Writing Quality - Other than slight(possible) mistakes on a few words here and there, there's not really a problem. there might be different words and phrases that could be changed for better understanding of what's currently going on at a given point in the story, but doesn't dampen the story in any way. Story Development - Absolutely perfect; this was done exceptionally well, from one arc of the story to the next. I could say that this was done so well that it doesn't really feel like a fan fiction in that regard. (keep up the good work author-chan😊) Character Design - This was done spectacularly; I love how Christina flows in the story so naturally, her interactions with known characters like Harry, Hermione, Ron, Luna, etc. and how she changes the story so dynamically while also still keeping the original plot together as the story continues from one book to another. Updating Stability - Fantastic, the author made a schedule and stuck to it to the best of her ability. (we all have things that need attention in our lives so we can't blame you author 👍) World Background - This definitely was done as good as the others if not done better. it's the feeling that I got when reading this that made me think; oh wow, this makes me feel like I'm actually reading a Harry Potter book and not a fan fiction.🤣 Overall, I'd give this book a solid 4.9 out of 5. while I can't say it's the best fan fiction out there that I've read, it's pretty d*mn close. And since I've read a couple fan fictions on Harry Potter, I know this definitely hits the nail right on the coffin. For some of you who are looking for a fan fiction of Harry Potter, those that want to start reading Harry Potter but didn't have the chance or time, or are looking for a interesting fan fiction; this is for you.

Fantastic story great main character arc it's a must read for harry Potter fans especially if you didn't appreciate how dumb the characters are in the original

Dang it I now all caught up. Now waiting on updates lol⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟☕☕☕☕☕☕☕

Great re-mix and fan-fic for Harry Potter, I love the character you added into the story, especially Chris and her love interest. Keep up the great writing and I look forward to seeing your the original you plan on writing. - From one fellow writer to another.

I gonna say the same thing i told in an another fanfiction Trollers(as in haters, complaint writers and the ones who haven't written a novel ) please write your own fanfiction would ya. With out copying any of the original material it's called a novel bakas not a fanfiction . The ones who have complaints write your own fanfiction and read the comments given by the trollers let's see how long u can work with a breakdown or run out of juice to write On to (all the) author san's Write!!!!!! if you stop a lot of people with no skill (me mostly )to write would be sad and won't be able to imagine how they would do in the fanfiction they are reading The world background it's hp which has a lot of plot holes which is found by ur dear fanfiction writers Peace out