Gremorys blodline ability is their incredible luck I think. Only reason Rias gets married because her father has better luck/has lived longer. Thats how he got his wife Vanelana and his son is OP. And both of his children inherted PoD (power of destruction) while main Bael family heir didnt.
What general you mean admiral.
Wow you are here as well. I think you fic will do better here than on RRL. Nice chapter anyway.
I havent read this but I want to give you an site which has many novels similar to yours and I hope you can find inspiration there. Royal Road.
This is just wrong. It should be "Get out of my sight you waste."
This is so fake and cringe dude wtf
Heaven WILL punish the wicked fellow daiost.
This is an amazing story full of great details and great character development as of chapter 9. There are few grammatical issues but its head and shoulders above the average this site has. Great work author and keep it up.
That "boy" sounds awkward. Remove it imo.
Rly I dont remember that.
Say can his balance breaker be some epic manifestation of labyrith minotaur was trapped in. Like make it hard to break and booby trap it with magic. You can even put animals in there and make it his storage space. Like you can collect animals in there that with simply being inside make it stronger. And ultimate power up would be to let ophis stay inside while you make it insanely silent.
He said he encountered them on his travels tho.
Ahem air antion doesn't exist anymore how did he encounter them is he over 100 years old?
Oh... I remeber her by Golden Wind (avatar fic on QQ) author there portrayed her diffrently.
Yes or go to mystical spirit who might kill you or which you dont even know how to find? And some earthbending idiots from desert can be destryed with his physical prowess no problem he can use cactus juice to waterbend.