Review Detail of Slowbat in Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen

Item: Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen
Rating: 1.2

Review detail

SlowbatLv54yrSlowbat

In the first few minutes the line "but you didn't saw it" was uttered, such a grave offence shall not be forgiven. Would not suggest reading, unless you are an uncultured pig the horrendous errors that lay within shall physically hurt you.

Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen

Mystical_Snowflake

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Replies7

DreamzWorkLv4DreamzWork

Hhmmm

4yr

Chado_SamaLv5Chado_Sama

This made me laugh.

4yr

Ahtu_FlaggLv4Ahtu_Flagg

Well, you know what they say. No pain no gain. There are good story tellers with ****e grammar. I keep reading and hope they get someone to edit it later on. Happens a lot(ofc sometimes I just keep suffering until I give up on it).

4yr

Ahtu_FlaggLv4Ahtu_Flagg

Fair assessment though. Thanks for warning away those that won't be able to suffer through it.

4yr

Ahtu_FlaggLv4Ahtu_Flagg

You know what I find way worse tho? No tags... I don't want to start getting into a story, only to have it become some weird story about gender dysphoria, inconsistent characters, NTR bs, cheater sympathizing, or other twilight-esque fcked up business.

4yr

AzmuthLv4Azmuth

It's nothing like that give it a try. It does have lots of drama though.

Ahtu_Flagg:You know what I find way worse tho? No tags... I don't want to start getting into a story, only to have it become some weird story about gender dysphoria, inconsistent characters, NTR bs, cheater sympathizing, or other twilight-esque fcked up business.

7mth

HumbuubLv4Humbuub

what did they did?

5mth