Review Detail of SnowRose in Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen

This is by far one of the best Harry Potter Fanfics you’re going to find. It’s not something entirely different and does follow the main story plot, however, the author does a very good job at making the story their own with original characters thrown into the mix which change the plot. The author clearly understands and knows the world of Harry Potter well and it is an amazing story if you enjoyed the Books. Now the bad- I binge read the entire story up to chapter 295 or so and I have to say, up until chapter 250 I couldn’t take my eyes off the book. It made you feel as if you were reading a real Harry Potter book with its own plot. Sadly around 250 the romance made me lose some of my motivation to continue reading. Without spoiling to much, basically the romance was perfect, it had its ups and downs and even if they didn’t end up together in the end, it was still perfectly executed. Until around chapter 250 when the author decided to change the love interest of the main character and the entire story crashed for me. The first love interest was perfect and the author had an amazing romance subplot going for them which they could have taken in so many ways. But they decided to have the MC fall for someone who doesn’t fit them at all. They said “The MC having feelings for him just felt obvious for me.” But for me and a lot of other people it did not feel correct at all. It felt forced and their personality didn’t feel like they meshed together at all. Yes they have stuff in common but that’s not enough, she shouldn’t have fallen for him like how she did. That’s my only gripe with this book. It was perfect and yes the author can do what they want, but if the MC does end up with who she currently likes then I honestly don’t know if I can handle reading more which makes me beyond sad because I love the book so much. Anyways that’s just my personal Review and Opinion, if you disagree then that’s not a bad thing. Don’t hate.