webnovel

HALF A HEART

Author: Azure04
Realistic Fiction
Ongoing · 50.2K Views
  • 39 Chs
    Content
  • 4.8
    44 ratings
  • NO.200+
    SUPPORT
Synopsis

''You're just going to drown deeper.. There's no way out.. The more you try to move, the more you try to swim, the deeper you'll sink.. The most painful thing about sadness is that it knows how to trick you.. It give you time to recover just to attack you even harder.. It tricks you into thinking that it's gone and just when you start to believe it, it comes back like a big wave and drag you back into the deep dark ocean of loneliness..'' That was exactly what Jake was going through.. He thought he will find his happiness if he get a good job, buy a house for his family etc.. But money can't buy happiness.. Things can only give pleasure and pleasure is not happiness.. Happiness is the presence of peace which was no where to be found in Jake's heart.. Half of his heart died the day Abby left.. The remaining died when his own parents stopped calling his name and started treating him like a stranger.. He stopped believing in miracles long ago .. But fate is something unpredictable and unstoppable..

Tags
9 tags
You May Also Like

The Blind Swordsman.

A boy with an unfortunately tragic past grew up into an emotionless retard and became an assassin codenamed [Stylish-Assassin], who never bothered to hide his face even at the scenes of his missions; as such, the woman who loved him from the bottom of her heart was found out by the authorities from the government, who used her to keep an eye on him and dispose of him at any given moment. He who knew learned about that for a long time decided to resolve the matters with his death being the conclusions, but what he got was far too different for what he wanted, as the 'reason' that made him want to live another day even if it had to strive for it, ceased to exist that..... Without a reason or a will to live, he picked up the revolver held hand of his now dead 'reason' that made him want to live, and shot himself. What he thought was the end, Was instead a new beginning; He involuntarily found himself believing that, It was another chance in life, but DING-! [Character’s synchronised story has been successfully re-enacted!] “This scene should remain in your mind as you die. Take this as a lesson to never go against an aristocrat!” The man with a hoarse and cold voice said and slashed Mark’s eyes with his dagger. [User, Daddy_Darkness’, customized character has been created!] [Perfect synchronisation complete!] [[Mutated sewage rat’s crystal] [Rank – F (-)] [Inconsumable] has been consumed!] [[Abyssal (Ex)] has been activated!] With a clear target for his revenge etched onto his consciousness, he set foot into a path threaded with blood and cold darkness that lead him to the very depths of the abyss as he strived to become stronger than his target, even if the path leading him held life-threatening dangers at each step..... DING-! [An [Unborn Tower] has begun plundering over the [Essence] from the [Assimilated] worlds] *** AN: I don’t know who the artist of the cover is, but if you want me to remove it.... you can ask me to do so (T-T). Credits to the artist. --- [Saturdays I may or may not upload]

_Eshwar_ · Realistic
3.9
260 Chs

ratings

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background
Reviews
Liked
Newest
Chrissie_Swift
Chrissie_SwiftLv12Chrissie_Swift

This is actually outside what I usually read and what made me want to finish is the writer’s good grammar and descriptions. Good job writer, I look forward to reading more.

MrCornelismalan
MrCornelismalanLv1MrCornelismalan

Its a good written book with awesome storyline, it has heart, and brilliance in it, all that you want from a story is in here, nice third person view

Mary_Onaduja
Mary_OnadujaLv2Mary_Onaduja

I'm just short of words. There is no word in my dictionary that I can use to qualify the greatness of this book but I would still go ahead and say a few words. The author did a good job in the first chapter. I could almost imagine the heart break. And I agree with the author why our heart break doesn't sound.

fyaya
fyayaLv13fyaya

I love how writer expressed everything beautifully. I would say, this fictional story is written very realistic? Like in life, sometimes you did everything to make the relationship work, but if it didn't work out, it wont. Good Job writer [img=recommend]

Scarlett_Jane
Scarlett_JaneLv2Scarlett_Jane

I want to come back to this book when I'm in a better headspace. It's a bit melodramatic I feel, which can be tiring, but it's good writing overall. The kind of book that pulls you in and demands you pay attention. I enjoy books like this. They take you out of your comfort zone in the best way

Emmanuel_Peter203
Emmanuel_Peter203Lv4Emmanuel_Peter203

The style easily draws the reader into the story. The book is beautifully created and the story that underpins it is well thought out. Good job author. I am waiting for the New chapters. 👍

Cute_BooblyMe
Cute_BooblyMeLv10Cute_BooblyMe

It's my first time reading this kind of genre and I can say you did awesomely. The storyline and the character in your book are amazing. How to be accepted by the people we love? I want to know too😿😿😿

Fallen_Tear
Fallen_TearLv10Fallen_Tear

This is a fictional story that is quite interesting to read. The initial plot is also unusual, and very good.😍😍 Wow, I'm really really impressed! Keep it up Author! 🔥🔥

AntiTeoSensai
AntiTeoSensaiLv2AntiTeoSensai

I'm usually not into slice of life but the first two chapters have been surprisingly great, I want to know what happens next so I'll continue reading.

moved_44
moved_44Lv1moved_44

What a nice work you got there... with interesting characters 🥰🥰🥰I'm gonna follow up to the end of the book. Keep up the good work author...

Iin_Romita
Iin_RomitaLv3Iin_Romita

plot twist Very cool . interesting story. I just read a story from Pakistan. the line is not market. different from other stories. passion for work✌️✌️

Sikota_The_Great19
Sikota_The_Great19Lv1Sikota_The_Great19

It's a very interesting book and I feel the way the author wrote the book was very descriptive but yet simple too. Otherwise it's a real page turner and I can't wait to see what happens next. Really hope the Author doesn't stop writing because that would be a shame.

mudita_upreti
mudita_upretiLv1mudita_upreti

I think that whoever will read this book would be able to connect with it from the very first chapter. Very few books have capability to make the reader feel emotional and the author did a very good job in doing this. Recommended to all.

qurat_ul_ain4
qurat_ul_ain4Lv1qurat_ul_ain4

Beautifully written! You explained each scenario in so much detail that I got lost in that moment. Keep up the hardwork! All the luck for you. [img=recommend]

Tare_baby99
Tare_baby99Lv2Tare_baby99

This is wonderful, best story I've read this year. 😍😍😍😍😍😍. can't wait to see what happens. I'm so loving the progression More chapters please.

Asong_Rophine
Asong_RophineLv1Asong_Rophine

Reveal spoiler

Reet_Amber
Reet_AmberLv3Reet_Amber

Author did a remarkable job making the characters alive and human. Honestly speaking while reading the first chapter I didn't feel like I was reading a book. It felt like I was talking to myself. you know some deep talk we all do with ourselves every now and then. Great job!! Keep it up Author💙👍

Maryam_Asif_3150
Maryam_Asif_3150Lv1Maryam_Asif_3150

You're missing on such a good story if you're not reading this. I love it so much. That's all I have to say. Give them a happy ending please.

Erin_Tierney
Erin_TierneyLv1Erin_Tierney

It's really good and beautiful. I feel Jake's pain as Abby doesn't seem to remember them. It's perfectly crafted with every ounce of sadness. The fact that only their sister is supporting them is really good. Plus, "it doesn't matter if we end up together, we can make few memories to ourselves. "

therealessylove
therealessyloveLv1therealessylove

This book is amazing! I love the good use of English and Grammar . The description is 😘😘 and the storyline is wonderful! A very great read. Hoping for more chapters . Ride on author!

SUPPORT

More about this book

Report