Candylollipops18
"I am their doom, and I will destroy them all" -Grace Sign this one line of word had taking my attention in, added to my bookmark!. haha at first glance, people would thinking that this author is ridiculously ambitious. but when you read the line above extra carefully. i bet you know what will be happened. simple feedback from me to those who wants to read it, dont judge the book from its cover, you will get surprised!
Writing Quality & Stability of Updates. Although there were some punctuations to be fixed, I enjoyed reading the story so far. Story Development, Character Design & World Background. Currently, I have read 7 out of 9 chapters. It is still too early to know the development of the story however, I would say it made a good start!
Nice KLK cover. A refreshing POV to read, as opposed to the wallflower villainesses of common knowledge. Grammar-wise, the only problem would be the lack of proper punctuation usage. Specifically, the lack of periods on multiple sentences. Dialogue is natural, which is a plus, and prose is adequate. Keep on writing π