Reviews of GOTO V.0

My name says it all. Expect a brutal, ruthless MC. My grammar, punctuation and paragraphing isnt that good at the beginning as I was still learning but I promise it improves. If you dislike seeing your favorite heroes get beaten to a pulp and humiliated, then this isn’t for you. It has some comedy, character development for those around the Mc and so on. Expect a lot of morally questionable content in this fic.

GOTO is my first ever project as a writer. I started writing it on a whim and just made things up as I went along. Surprisingly it got more popular than I imagined, thus I rewrote the entire book which mind you had over 150k words at the time. I did this because although I know my book is far from perfect, they are many who enjoy it. It has some inconsistencies, some things may not make sense and some parts lack action. It’s far from perfect and I’m far from being a great author but I’m truly proud of what I’ve made. For those who’ve been with me since day 1, I’d like to just say thanks. Whether this falls in popularity or I get busy, I never abandon my work. That’s the G.O.B way.

For fanfic for DC and marvel, so far it being done great. The character isn't a naïve hero obsessed protagonist and he border a bit off evil to be consider a no good villain. It an awesome read and i am looking for more.

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Hurts to read, feels like this is self insert. anybody that has a brain, can tell that the mc is not a sharp tool. if you want my opinion of this fan fac it feels rushed, and no character development, i Don't feel attached to the main character at all. this feels more like something you find on wattpad

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I really love your story I always hated idiotic heroes that help other people at their own expense. I mean just because a person got powers doesn't mean he have to help them and being always evil is also stupid too, now a neutral MC who does things to increase their own goals without being constrained by the shackles society put on them and living his life freely however he likes, now that's something interesting.

so, for those who want to know the summary of the story then I have a sentence to sum it. "Hypocrisy to the limit" the hypocrisy in the story is so much that you want to puke. oh god. it was good at first but later it was so stupid that Mac is contradicting in his ways. I don't mind the things but what I can't stand is Hypocrisy. so, this story is not for me.

It is bit too rushed and your narrative of the world lacks realistic feeling and certain flavors. While, I commend you on a good (well subpar, but honestly on this site it is good as 4 star Fic with those trash fics littering the app.) fic, I think you need to proof read your works and do some editing for both grammar and writing structures, based on your numerous incorrect usage of Upper form of letter instead of lower form.

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I love this book, I've read hundreds of fanfics and this is one of the best one's that I've ever read. Every line keeps me engaged and wanting to read more.

MC instantly becomes the "most powerful being in the universe" and goes on to be also the most annoying, arrogant, yet completely stupid and pointless being in the universe. There is no worldbuilding, no coherent story, no character development, and no reason get invested in or even empathize with the MC (unless you're a psychically disturbed megalomaniac). Gave it a fair chance, dropped at about 33%. Seriously bad.

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It was a good story, i don't mind mc being cruel & brutal but the blackmailing part to Lois is just huge turn of for me, why have you made mc have s*x with Lois in front of superman? i dislike it very much. i would prefer torture or outright killing both of them or just mind control them.

Basic wn junk+smut story, you can enjoy it while turning your brain off. The mc are too edgy for me, but I suppose I should have known this from the author name itself. Besides that, this story is enjoyable enough for wasting your free time, just don't questioning the plot too much and endure a few cringe here and there.

I really liked this fanfic, every line of text is so exciting that I want to start re-reading this fanfic all at once, I hope that on further reading it will not get worse if this happens I will get very upset. I would like to write a more detailed review, but now I absolutely have neither the time nor the desire to write something sensible, so in the next couple of days I will most likely write a normal review, with all the pros and cons (for me, of course)

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Just another boring MC who likes killing. I thought it'd be a bit more than that but his (author) name really does encompass the whole of this story. Grammar isn't great but definitely good enough. story isn't terrible but it just seems very one dimensional.

Self-fulfilling story...