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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper16h
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    Only at ch. 12 but I feel if I read further my opinion of this story will worsen. There are a lot of great elements about this story. I would of given it a higher score if the author didn't randomly make characters white. im not saying the author is racist but he's probably a creep. impossible to justify why he did that. Second, is I feel this story is about to follow that trend of authors who have some weird fetish, hopefully not sexual, with making their MCs have anger issues or bloodlust that seem to infest their whole lives. manufactured drama with an OC no one cares about. there hasn't been much yet but its been teased. Hopefully I'm wrong and the anger issues aren't a reoccurring problem either but who are we kidding. easiest kinda plotline to write. Other than that the story is great.

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    OmniverseJumper16h
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    "She. Was. Not. A. Mistake," I glared at her with rage, rage enough to find the need to rip her head out.
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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper18h
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    90% of the adults i know are still childish. including myself. I dont question a thing.

    Some might wonder why I'm being childish, well we all at one point of our life wanted to return back to our childhood, it could be because of the stupid things we did when we thought being a adult was cool or just to live a random memory once again and now that I have the chance I don't want to look cool but just be childish.
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    Marvel : Rise Of Venom
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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper1d
    Posted

    The story started off good. Expanding the potter universe greatly. the MC is outgoing and intelligent but he seemed to deviate off the plot to do side missions endlessly. Playing passive, claiming it was to protect his family, he mostly goes through the same hesitant motions when interacting with the Golden trio or major plot over and over again. Its so repetitive that its gotten old and stale. The author uses deception to keep you guessing about love interests, friends, and enemies. You could erase 80% of the story and you'd basically have the original plot with a smarter Harry and his sister. Its sad to see such a story go to waste. But the author wanted to be different so badly he ended up with this. hey at least some folk enjoyed it. I Suspect the final bad guy to be his wand he seems so terrified of. lololol

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    HP: A Magical Journey
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    OmniverseJumper2d
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    Erza quickly requips a long chain and slings it towards Natsu, barely catching his leg "Get over here." she yanks the chain pulling him in slamming him to the ground.
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    Fairy Slayer in Fairytail
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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper2d
    Replied to D_Dz

    Terrible review for a terrible story

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    Naruto : The Strongest of the Uchiha
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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper3d
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    oh no hes nerfing his capabilities.

    Although those armed forces are awesome, Zeke's Iron Legion is more awesome than them.
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    Transmigrated With A Movie Tech System
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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper3d
    Posted

    There's no character called black Phoenix. No excuses for that bad of translation if they meant "dark." Translations are the worst!!!!!!!!! especially the Chinese ones.

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    Marvel: My Wife is Dark Phoenix!
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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper3d
    Commented

    what the MC looks like when he's worrying about the timeline.

    Daichi closed the book on the grass village and crossed his arms. 'There is no point in thinking about people I can't help… Come to think of it, would I even help her if it came to it? If I helped her would that lead to a different future? She will be a crucial element in the future. If I do anything regarding her situation what will happen? Will I create a timeline that could be even worse than the one shown? Answers to that are unknown. Because of these reasons, I barely helped Naruto and he's at arms length from me…'
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    OmniverseJumper3d
    Commented

    RIP

    Ch 17 Chapter 17: Epik Jutsu
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    In Naruto As An Uzumaki
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    OmniverseJumper5d
    Replied to Nofa

    lol well it can't get slower than this. A two month long volleyball match and you say take it slow. he obviously has the slow part mastered.

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: Fake Jumper
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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper5d
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    cuz he's sandshrew. a pile of sentient mud. having to watch such a boring pokemon battle might be a struggle. hoping im wrong.

    Like why didn't Sandshrew have an ability? Every Pokemon had an ability back on Earth. And what did levels even measure? The overall power of the Pokemon? How close they were to learning a new move? Did Pokemon even learn moves by level up?
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    OmniverseJumper5d
    Commented

    WALLACE! NOOOOO!

    Or hanging Wallace, dating Cynthia, these are all questions to think about.
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    Pokemon: Treasure Chest System
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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper6d
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    love the originals but you could always do better. a few holes that were skipped over and untouched that could be explored too. Definitely excited that your writing will be improving since it's already entertaining enough! Good to love what you do! keep it up!

    Ch 75 Author Update
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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper6d
    Replied to ThePrsn

    none of the main girls have a quality you can hate as much as this dudes expressing. lol your parents were mean to you weren't they? poor child.

    "Ivy," there was a good pause before he continued, "I'll be honest with you, but this reminds me of the time you broke into my office."
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    HP: A Magical Journey
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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper7d
    Posted

    Just another boring MC who likes killing. I thought it'd be a bit more than that but his (author) name really does encompass the whole of this story. Grammar isn't great but definitely good enough. story isn't terrible but it just seems very one dimensional.

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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper9d
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    a bartending bear in Naruto... Sounds like terrible powers and could be terribly boring. but ill give it a chance.

    Ch 3 Chapter 1 – Your desire and cherry flavour
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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper10d
    Commented

    could of just said "if they stole the loot ill kill them." Clarifying why you recruited them seems pointless.

    He looked at the empty treasury and muttered "I didn't save you both because I took pity on how you died in the canon but because I felt you are more useful to me alive than dead. But if seeing all this wealth you got greedy then I won't hesitate to kill you and Haku."
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    Naruto: Uchiha's Genjutsu Demon
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    OmniverseJumper12d
    Replied to Skill_Top
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    Prince of the Desert
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  • OmniverseJumper
    OmniverseJumper12d
    Replied to Skill_Top

    Sorry your parents were mean to you!

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    Prince of the Desert
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