Only at ch. 12 but I feel if I read further my opinion of this story will worsen. There are a lot of great elements about this story. I would of given it a higher score if the author didn't randomly make characters white. im not saying the author is racist but he's probably a creep. impossible to justify why he did that. Second, is I feel this story is about to follow that trend of authors who have some weird fetish, hopefully not sexual, with making their MCs have anger issues or bloodlust that seem to infest their whole lives. manufactured drama with an OC no one cares about. there hasn't been much yet but its been teased. Hopefully I'm wrong and the anger issues aren't a reoccurring problem either but who are we kidding. easiest kinda plotline to write. Other than that the story is great.
90% of the adults i know are still childish. including myself. I dont question a thing.
The story started off good. Expanding the potter universe greatly. the MC is outgoing and intelligent but he seemed to deviate off the plot to do side missions endlessly. Playing passive, claiming it was to protect his family, he mostly goes through the same hesitant motions when interacting with the Golden trio or major plot over and over again. Its so repetitive that its gotten old and stale. The author uses deception to keep you guessing about love interests, friends, and enemies. You could erase 80% of the story and you'd basically have the original plot with a smarter Harry and his sister. Its sad to see such a story go to waste. But the author wanted to be different so badly he ended up with this. hey at least some folk enjoyed it. I Suspect the final bad guy to be his wand he seems so terrified of. lololol
oh no hes nerfing his capabilities.
There's no character called black Phoenix. No excuses for that bad of translation if they meant "dark." Translations are the worst!!!!!!!!! especially the Chinese ones.
what the MC looks like when he's worrying about the timeline.
cuz he's sandshrew. a pile of sentient mud. having to watch such a boring pokemon battle might be a struggle. hoping im wrong.
love the originals but you could always do better. a few holes that were skipped over and untouched that could be explored too. Definitely excited that your writing will be improving since it's already entertaining enough! Good to love what you do! keep it up!
none of the main girls have a quality you can hate as much as this dudes expressing. lol your parents were mean to you weren't they? poor child.
Just another boring MC who likes killing. I thought it'd be a bit more than that but his (author) name really does encompass the whole of this story. Grammar isn't great but definitely good enough. story isn't terrible but it just seems very one dimensional.
could of just said "if they stole the loot ill kill them." Clarifying why you recruited them seems pointless.