GodFather System: All my kids are weird

I enjoyed reading this book, but I feel it has some major problems. Mainly the grammar is truly of Webnovel quality as it’s left me confused more than once. Another problem I’ve seen initially is that the author seems to be running before learning to walk in the sense of world background. The author seems to have an idea of the landscape they’re trying to write but often there is mentions of things that make no sense without background knowledge that simply isn’t present. All in all if you can look past the hard to read grammar there is a gem of a story to see. TLDR: worth reading but don’t bother if grammar bothers you.

So far I’ve likes it, no wrong spellings and the plot is good. But author you might wanna change the synopsis, your synopsis is similar to those translated ones synopsis so when I first read the synopsis I thought that it was like one of those bad translated ones. Glad I still read it though, keep it up. 👍 Also do you have an update schedule?

the idea of the novel is good and grammar is also nice, it's just that the flow of reading breaks sometimes due to the wording. overall I like it.[img=recommend]

The idea seems interesting and I don't dislike the characters but The writing quality would get 0 stars if the minimum wasn't 1. It's barely understandable most of the time and sometimes it goes below that. It has that MTL feel too. Tbh, it's draining to read, exhausting even. Up to chapter 27, world bg isn't developed much but I decided to give it 4/5 stars for it seemed to be heading in the right direction.