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This needs to be read. If you are browsing novels, looking for something good, you NEED to read tbis book. By far, my favorite novel so far. It has an interesting, origonal story, where the author is doing something not usually seen. Great character design and growth, and a world story that makes you desperatly want to know more. Stable updates with an author very generous witg bonus chapters, and great grammer and editing. Honestly, truly deserves 5 stars.
Among all the novels on this site, this is my favorite. It has a constant updating and good development of the main character (in my opinion), and so far I have not been disappointed in anything (almost all the novels I read have had disappointments in some parts). And also the author has a good contact with its readers by the discord.
The idea is great and creative. Gramma and sentence structure is good... Sadly the title is very misleading. Cuz mc is the exact opposite of every word the title means. God ? Yes as in name and race as the novel describe but truly is a slave to the system (The system even deducted his precious points cuz mc was rude, it was an attempt bof comedy but sadly is not funny at all) Game designer? Yes the novel describe him as such but he doesn't even think like a game designer/creator? His actions are similar to that of an air headed person that want to get instructions what he need to do. Seriously, mc should be despairing not accepting the outcome and even thinkbof scraping after he is disconnected from the game as if he forgot his 7 years of hard work. Also, the game story back ground was written in a way that it didnt even reach drafting stage... Basically, this is like an isakei mc who receive a cheat system with some word play...
Alright, this is as of Chapter 41. The updates are stable, and if you are on the Author's discord, you would be aware of the fact that he has a backlog, just in case something comes up. The writing quality is okay. I found a lot of minor errors, but it doesn't distract too much from the story unless I'm looking for them. The development is interesting, and you can clearly see the main character changing, growing to accept what happened to him, which leads to character design. So far the characters seem well designed, and they seem to have a reason for their actions, which is far better than the alternative. The world design is great. Due to events that happened, even the creator (the MC) doesn't know everything about the world, but he knows enough to inform others, and you can clearly see the amount of thought put into it. I recommend this book to everyone, and I hope they all enjoy it.
Bad story. A ‘God’ is forced to walk with humans and no one saw that as a problem? For a “Creator God” to act pathetically weak like that is humiliating. Betrayed by an AI to be stuck in your own game? Because it’s for “his own good”? Would probably be a good story if he is not a ‘God’(a Creator God no less) but he is, so it made the story look illogical. It doesn’t make sense.
Didn't like it. Story is boring and very little happens. Pacing is also slow. Grammar is ok, but the writing method is annoying. Author will write a scene from a POV and then rewrite it from another POV, only adding the thoughs of the other character. This happens all the time. For f*cks sake, do this only if a scene is really interesting and the other POV adds a lot more detail to the story, otherwise is just plain filler. Wanted to read more before writing a review but was already to annoyed at chap 29.
Weak Overpowered MC just stupid. No character development. Just basic stupid MC with a overpowered system that downgrading him, giving him title that not even funny like The Fool and more stupid titles. The author force comedy that gone wrong when yoU read this feel how stupid the author is. And there a big plot hole that his a god and you never feel it one bit. Even his followers downgrade him God to DemiGod, How stupid can you be? I feel the author try to nerfed him in a wrong way. You can't nerf a God more or less his Creator God its like saying Superman get punch by a normal human and die. Not recommended!
Trash, so many fillers that i could die from boredome, the side characters overshadows the mc and they're not even interesting, and the mc gets treated like trash by its creation? and get points deducted from him cause he just said something stupid? why do authors have the fetish to make the system abuse them, like are you brain dead, and when it was already so bad the vampire tries to attack the creator himself whilst knowing so, like is it retarded lmao, if its humor you're going for then i'd say its 0/10.
Review plus rant The plot is good and I have no problem about that.. BUT story development is f*cking frustrating it is immersion breaking asf Chapter X MC rampages the city and ends in a cliffhanger (reviving his daughter) Chapter Y expect to learn what happen.. what you get? side characters story about trades next chapters about that? Fillers. lot of lot of filler chapters... It is about side characters flaunting their skills and this annoying character interaction tldr it is about fillers and mood breaking chapters.. this chapter and the next makes your waiting time for a chapter a waste..