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I only gave you this score for the 130 chapters already written. I really can't stand your lack of logic, he's supposed to be a programmer, rational, calculative, take in account of risk, rewards and possibles outcomes (I'm a programmer, so believe me when I say that we must see beyond a ****** fix and contemplate future changes). So I read until 16th chapter, but I couldn't take it anymore. Let's recap: >Arrived at his OWN game in real life, into an arid desert. >Has the user interface only with faith system added. >Went to "people asking for a god for help". >Display his power, killing a dude soooo far away with a bow that requires practiced skills to use, stopped 10.00 arrows in the air like matrix ****....Worst of all? He didn't even know he had those powers but somewhat he is already masterfully using. Also, he wasn't even shocked that he could do that. >Everyone was awed at his really long cock so he has now points to do more deeds to even more worshiping. See the pattern here? >Already gained a demi-god bow at chapter 13. <<His long-term/short-term goals? Not even explained the readers supposed to know what the **** the MC is thinking <<Shocked about him being in the game? Not even mentioned <<Worried about people killing him? already covered dude, has a demi-god bodyguard (obviously female and next in line for a harem, of course) and a demi-god weapon in chapter 13th. If I were him I would go to a big city, convince the mayor and do deeds left and right and I will gain infinite points...for what? Idk he already has infitit powers and some specific powers on the system. I don't know the goal of this whole novel. TL,DR: The entire system lacks logic and it's flauty as hell. The MC has no goal and no intention of explaining to the readers what is he doing and why is doing it.

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