Review Detail of HatoYin in God is a Game Designer
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The idea is great and creative. Gramma and sentence structure is good... Sadly the title is very misleading. Cuz mc is the exact opposite of every word the title means. God ? Yes as in name and race as the novel describe but truly is a slave to the system (The system even deducted his precious points cuz mc was rude, it was an attempt bof comedy but sadly is not funny at all) Game designer? Yes the novel describe him as such but he doesn't even think like a game designer/creator? His actions are similar to that of an air headed person that want to get instructions what he need to do. Seriously, mc should be despairing not accepting the outcome and even thinkbof scraping after he is disconnected from the game as if he forgot his 7 years of hard work. Also, the game story back ground was written in a way that it didnt even reach drafting stage... Basically, this is like an isakei mc who receive a cheat system with some word play...
God is a Game Designer
Cddizzym
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Hi. Thank you for the review. I never intended for this to be the case, In some of the later chapters, I do shine a light into why this is set up the way it is. It also shows why the MC has a change in attitude, Who has set up the system and even why some of the humour points had been made. I'm deeply disappointed that you did not enjoy this story and I can only hope that In the future you will give it another shot once the story is more complete.
How should I put this... For example u r building a house Is like you prepared a top notch blue print and top notch base materials. But you.hured a questionable engineer and make use of third handed equipment and other necessity material of cheap quality... The final result is it looks expensive and promising but it leaks water, poor temperature regulations, weak foundation and so on... Seriously, atleast plan your character development and brain storm a good background story. The plot will naturally flow along as the character go through its development...
Cddizzym:Hi. Thank you for the review. I never intended for this to be the case, In some of the later chapters, I do shine a light into why this is set up the way it is. It also shows why the MC has a change in attitude, Who has set up the system and even why some of the humour points had been made. I'm deeply disappointed that you did not enjoy this story and I can only hope that In the future you will give it another shot once the story is more complete.
Thank you for explaining this to me. Ill be rather honest as this is my second novel and I was never all to good at English or stories in general. I will keep working on the novel and I will try to do my best to improve as I continue working on it.
HatoYin: How should I put this... For example u r building a house Is like you prepared a top notch blue print and top notch base materials. But you.hured a questionable engineer and make use of third handed equipment and other necessity material of cheap quality... The final result is it looks expensive and promising but it leaks water, poor temperature regulations, weak foundation and so on... Seriously, atleast plan your character development and brain storm a good background story. The plot will naturally flow along as the character go through its development...
Cddizzym:Hi. Thank you for the review. I never intended for this to be the case, In some of the later chapters, I do shine a light into why this is set up the way it is. It also shows why the MC has a change in attitude, Who has set up the system and even why some of the humour points had been made. I'm deeply disappointed that you did not enjoy this story and I can only hope that In the future you will give it another shot once the story is more complete.