Review Detail of GraveWalker in God is a Game Designer

Good at the beginning, but feels rushed as of chapter 9. How many cliffs did he smply jumped off? I understand that the people he's protecting are in a ravine like place with an exit and entrance and that he was watching from below and jumped down next to feya, but then he goes to jump off another cliff, and like what's going on here? Please explain the environment little better. I wish you success in this novel cause it's interesting!!