Review Detail of hawlol in God is a Game Designer

Didn't like it. Story is boring and very little happens. Pacing is also slow. Grammar is ok, but the writing method is annoying. Author will write a scene from a POV and then rewrite it from another POV, only adding the thoughs of the other character. This happens all the time. For f*cks sake, do this only if a scene is really interesting and the other POV adds a lot more detail to the story, otherwise is just plain filler. Wanted to read more before writing a review but was already to annoyed at chap 29.