Killerpants
Review chapter 1-62. I'm giving this one a five star for now, the MCs logic is quite hmm believable but sometimes annoying and the author knows he needs to add logic in every possible way because of the worldbuilding but.. I'm curious how they are communicating and words just translate but how do you explain words so foreign like fashion to a caveman and they somehow grasp it?
Really nice story about being Transmigrated to a prehistoric world and becoming the leader of a tribe. Good use of Modern Knowledge in combination with Kingdom Building. The MC's main love interest has the curiosity and scientific mind of a modern person, maybe even more in many cases. But, I don't know if we're ever going to see him become the emperor because the author seems to have stopped updating since about 4 months ago.
Other than a few grammatical errors, the unique premise and great start really kept me reading until the latest chapters. Only thing I might add is that you should have more tags to give any readers a heads up on what they should expect: romance, R-18, ( potential ) harem, and action is just a few suggestions based off of what I read so far. All in all, keep up the good work author ! (╹◡╹)
Your trying to put too many things into movement. Focus on one part of the plot and improve on that then the story will be easier to follow. However, i like this story even though its slow paced at times its also intresting. Deffinately not one of those stories you can flick through easily you gotta commit to enjoy this story!
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