ChesterCure
It's a change. This seems really good. I dont usually think much of fan fics since they usually go downhill after 20-30 chapters but this one has alot of potential. If you could turn this into a complete story it would be awesome. Also dont drop pls, fanfics dropping at 16 chapters is just very sad.
It is a great idea that the author has, only that it is very used. The personality of the character seems very unstable or forced throughout the chapters for someone who lived 100,000 years like the scenes and events, although it is an au the author is guided in the original and that is wrong, it should create a story without worry or be guided by the canon
"I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" P. S. Unique premise??? Look, I am not frequently visiting Ff. Net. But this is as much unique as premise of noble devil son, that was shunned down and unloved by his parents.
Let's start with the best part, Update stability. Considering we have a daily update of 2 chapters, There should be no protest on this part. Story development can be considered as good enough? While Character design and World background more or less DXD with some crossover. Writing quality is truly a major turn-off for this Fanfic. I won't claim that I have mastery over English grammar, but even for my standard, this writing quality needs great improvement pronto.