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Review Detail of Bark_in_the_Dark in DxD: Time leap

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Bark_in_the_Dark
Bark_in_the_DarkLv13yrBark_in_the_Dark

The personality of the character seems very unstable or forced throughout the chapters for someone who lived 100,000 years like the events, it feels as if the author will lack motivation or originality, all the things that the author adds are in the 99% of the other high school dxd ff.

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DxD: Time leap

ChesterCure

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ChesterCure
ChesterCureAuthorChesterCure

i won't argue with that. (no sarcasn cause i might sound like it)

EverythingRelevant
EverythingRelevantLv13EverythingRelevant

If you lived 100 thousand years wouldn’t you be unstable? The characters emptions are actually right on point in my opinion. Has room for tons of character development

GoWithTheFlow
GoWithTheFlowLv3GoWithTheFlow

i highly doubt that... at some point like maybe during your 1000 years you would be unstable but as time passes youd just forget about it. and if 100,000 years pass without you feeling anything or remembering anything then youll obviously not feel anything anymore. even if that didnt happen and he still had things troubling him then eurely he would think about it iver the 100,000 years and get over it right?

EverythingRelevant:If you lived 100 thousand years wouldn’t you be unstable? The characters emptions are actually right on point in my opinion. Has room for tons of character development
EverythingRelevant
EverythingRelevantLv13EverythingRelevant

Dude he wasnt feeling nothing he was feeling extreme pain and rage. 100,000 years of that will loterally do untold things to your mind

GoWithTheFlow:i highly doubt that... at some point like maybe during your 1000 years you would be unstable but as time passes youd just forget about it. and if 100,000 years pass without you feeling anything or remembering anything then youll obviously not feel anything anymore. even if that didnt happen and he still had things troubling him then eurely he would think about it iver the 100,000 years and get over it right?
Fellbane
FellbaneLv11Fellbane

No, you would forget after probably less than 100 years. Let me ask you this, do you remember everything you did as a child? Now multiply those missing memories by 1000x

EverythingRelevant:Dude he wasnt feeling nothing he was feeling extreme pain and rage. 100,000 years of that will loterally do untold things to your mind
Bark_in_the_Dark
Bark_in_the_DarkLv1Bark_in_the_Dark

If you know something about living beings, it is their adaptability, feeling pain for so long, sooner or later they will get used to that pain, leaving them as an empty shell. The closest thing to how the character should be, would be like ophis, someone "empty" with no "future" goal, someone almost emotionless. PS: if you try to tell me that ophis and the rest of the gods are "older", canonically the gods are around 10,000 years old in dxd. so ophis must be around that age, and great red should be much younger. like 8,000 years or something like that. Lucifer's war occurs at 5,000 years and the civil war of the demons at 8,000.

EverythingRelevant:Dude he wasnt feeling nothing he was feeling extreme pain and rage. 100,000 years of that will loterally do untold things to your mind
Bark_in_the_Dark
Bark_in_the_DarkLv1Bark_in_the_Dark

If you know something about living beings, it is their adaptability, feeling pain for so long, sooner or later they will get used to that pain, leaving them as an empty shell. The closest thing to how the character should be, would be like ophis, someone "empty" with no "future" goal, someone almost emotionless. PS: if you try to tell me that ophis and the rest of the gods are "older", canonically the gods are around 10,000 years old in dxd. so ophis must be around that age, and great red should be much younger. like 8,000 years or something like that. Lucifer's war occurs at 5,000 years and the civil war of the demons at 8,000.

EverythingRelevant:If you lived 100 thousand years wouldn’t you be unstable? The characters emptions are actually right on point in my opinion. Has room for tons of character development
EverythingRelevant
EverythingRelevantLv13EverythingRelevant

Bro imma be real with u it’s been two years and I have no idea what this novel is anymore 💀

Bark_in_the_Dark:If you know something about living beings, it is their adaptability, feeling pain for so long, sooner or later they will get used to that pain, leaving them as an empty shell. The closest thing to how the character should be, would be like ophis, someone "empty" with no "future" goal, someone almost emotionless. PS: if you try to tell me that ophis and the rest of the gods are "older", canonically the gods are around 10,000 years old in dxd. so ophis must be around that age, and great red should be much younger. like 8,000 years or something like that. Lucifer's war occurs at 5,000 years and the civil war of the demons at 8,000.