Review Detail of AlphaZwei in DxD: Time leap

Let's start with the best part, Update stability. Considering we have a daily update of 2 chapters, There should be no protest on this part. Story development can be considered as good enough? While Character design and World background more or less DXD with some crossover. Writing quality is truly a major turn-off for this Fanfic. I won't claim that I have mastery over English grammar, but even for my standard, this writing quality needs great improvement pronto.