Review Detail of Salmon_El_Solomon in DxD: Time leap
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It is a great idea that the author has, only that it is very used. The personality of the character seems very unstable or forced throughout the chapters for someone who lived 100,000 years like the scenes and events, although it is an au the author is guided in the original and that is wrong, it should create a story without worry or be guided by the canon
DxD: Time leap
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Yes, I understand what you mean, but since after a tremendous ff that he did before and started modifying many things from the original in the other, it feels as if he lacks motivation or originality to this one. That is my opinion and conclusion, I may be very blinded by the other but you have to admit it there are many novels that do the same as this one, Draig becomes irene, great red has a body and becomes a woman, ophis falls in love with the mc , a new enemy and "all powerful" are basic things that all the ff of DxD have there is nothing of originality .. Pd: sorry if you do not understand very well what I mean I am using an English translator it is not my language
deadly_orange:I kind of disagree canon can help with a timeline and some things happen regardless, you would have to remove whole characters and other types of things to change canon unless you want to change the whole story
Salmon_El_Solomon:Yes, I understand what you mean, but since after a tremendous ff that he did before and started modifying many things from the original in the other, it feels as if he lacks motivation or originality to this one. That is my opinion and conclusion, I may be very blinded by the other but you have to admit it there are many novels that do the same as this one, Draig becomes irene, great red has a body and becomes a woman, ophis falls in love with the mc , a new enemy and "all powerful" are basic things that all the ff of DxD have there is nothing of originality .. Pd: sorry if you do not understand very well what I mean I am using an English translator it is not my language
And I disagree with what the author has done with ddraig and stuff I prefer them becoming friends if anything
Salmon_El_Solomon:Yes, I understand what you mean, but since after a tremendous ff that he did before and started modifying many things from the original in the other, it feels as if he lacks motivation or originality to this one. That is my opinion and conclusion, I may be very blinded by the other but you have to admit it there are many novels that do the same as this one, Draig becomes irene, great red has a body and becomes a woman, ophis falls in love with the mc , a new enemy and "all powerful" are basic things that all the ff of DxD have there is nothing of originality .. Pd: sorry if you do not understand very well what I mean I am using an English translator it is not my language