Reviews of Duality

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"even in the landfill a flower can be born", this phrase represents this work very well and as a flower, it is growing and becoming more and more beautiful with the time. Congratulations author keep writing and improving this flower.

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Writing Quality: 3.5/5 (rounds to 4) Not bad, but needs some work. Easily fixable by going back and rereading your story. Update Stability: 5/5 I put that for everyone. Story Development: 3.5/5 (rounds to four) It is okay, a bit over the place at times, but I do enjoy your pacing. It doesn't go too fast nor is it slow paced. The plotline is interesting. Character Design: 3/5 You give background of the character with descriptions, even adding in his emotions, but I feel a disconnect with the MC, I feel no depth to him. It is there, but not enough for me to immerse with the MC. World Background: 3/5 You tell us whats in the world, and how they do things, but I feel no real descriptions or in-depth information on what the world is. I might be missing something because I only read more than half the chapters (skipped what I told you I would), so it just be me not connecting with story. It is not a bad story, there is potential to it. Keep up the good work!

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This story is stupid. It goes from 1 chapter continue the story and then 3 chapters flashback that could take half or less a chapter. then at chapter 21 you get 14! 14! chapters of flashback. so that means you had 17 chapters flashback and 18 of story. Just why? if you wanna start at a sooner in time do so. You know flash right, it seems FAST! Not slow ass shit.

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A F*****G great book!!! Chapters were long and meaningful. Characters are well thought out and vividly portrayed. S*x Scenes were also vividly portrayed The World Background was described very well. I was able to envision everything without much trouble. Overall a wonderful read! Looking forward to more chapters!

I haven't really caught up with the latest, however, so far so good. It was a well-written novel. Aside from some minor mistakes, there aren't that I can think of. The fact that a kid, can kill another human was a no-no for me. The updates too. 2 chaps/week just ain't working (for me). I want moar. Keep up the good work mate!