I was not expecting to see this, lol! You're awesome

didn't want to cuss at that point but it just my way of saying Jesus Christ.

let me know what's unclear. I will definitely go back and fix it up. I am doing well but busy. Thank you for reading and reaching out. 😄 Please stay safe.

😂😂😂😂

I'm sorry. It's very slow but it does get pieces together

Thank you for yor kind words. I am currently working on chapters I'm just a ittle slow. :)

thank you for reading 😄

awe that is awesome!

I'm a huge foodie😄

Alright, so oread both pre-change and then change and my mind was blown. The first version was somewhat slow and not very story like but then the author had to bring their "A" game and just captivate the reader from start to finish. Though the transition of speech to action is a little sloppy, if the author could find a way to mix the POVs together to make it flow smother it would be amazing however it still makes a good read. The characters are spectacular for first introductions and the world is still developing. Give it chance 😄😄😄

what?! what. what, what?! Dude I felt bad for you! Well Jasper in glad you were able to look at her, cough, cough, cough ***iness without batting an eye.

I think there may be a typo here. Or I could be completely wrong

poor Ryan... is okay man, not everyone is a winner in love

oh wow. I woke up this morning with coffee in my hands and was like wait... go back, look, process, wait... this is way different when the hell did I have this?! super captivating, took a few check to make sure it was still the same story😄

could have been more story like then factual... I only say this with experience. I know when I tell my kids a story and don't make it super exaggerated and factual they know I'm just trying to get through it and they reprimand me for it. like my favourite bedtime story, once upon a time the end. Real crowd pleaser.😋