Review Detail of Thereviewer48 in Duality

Writing Quality: 3.5/5 (rounds to 4) Not bad, but needs some work. Easily fixable by going back and rereading your story. Update Stability: 5/5 I put that for everyone. Story Development: 3.5/5 (rounds to four) It is okay, a bit over the place at times, but I do enjoy your pacing. It doesn't go too fast nor is it slow paced. The plotline is interesting. Character Design: 3/5 You give background of the character with descriptions, even adding in his emotions, but I feel a disconnect with the MC, I feel no depth to him. It is there, but not enough for me to immerse with the MC. World Background: 3/5 You tell us whats in the world, and how they do things, but I feel no real descriptions or in-depth information on what the world is. I might be missing something because I only read more than half the chapters (skipped what I told you I would), so it just be me not connecting with story. It is not a bad story, there is potential to it. Keep up the good work!