Review Detail of Scarlettbunny in Duality

After John dies it because a captivating story! You are left wondering how things are going to progress and questions things as one read along but they are answered perfectly making you want to read more. Very minimal grammatical errors so you can easily read without breaking your concentration. The only thing I have to complain about is the lack of detail about the world. There is only a little bit that I wish I could picture exactly the author sees the world for me I think of the forest in princess Mononoke same with the boar and the wind deer as the Forest spirit. The detail of the world does start to expand as you go into the city but again it's still minimal. Good job keep going 😀