Reviews of Dropped Novel [sample]

I was drawn by the plot of this tory. Mystery and romance mixed together creating an intriguing tale between a grim reaper and a hybrid. This setting is not your cliche trope. Although it was still early to see the progress but just from the early chapters, I can see the potential hidden within. keep writing.

The story is really nice! I like that there's a good balance between dialogue and description ( yes, I am a big fan of descriptions). You are able to give us insight both into the mind of the characters, but also into the world background, so it feels easier to introduce yourself into the story. Keep it up!

Really impressed by your writing skills. The words, adjectives used are just perfect . The plot of the story is also unique and interesting.

Definately not my favorite genre of story but the author does a good job of drawing the reader in with the realistic prose. Seems like a situation anyone can relate to. Great job!

A nice, relatively slow paced story. Some good character development, I love Lily particularly, she is very well crafted. I particularly like how the novel doesnt shy away from realism, which is fantastic. I think the plot is also good, and there are plenty of hooks that just make you want to keep reading! Just be careful with the grammar here and there! Fantastic work though!

Plenty of good ideas in this book, with some refining to do. The demon/half vampire idea throws us for a loop, and we quite wonder what is going to happen. We need to know more. We want to know more !

So, okay, here it goes, the way you describe and narrate things is nice. But I'd rather suggest you proofread your story because of confusing story flow and a bit of flawed development. I don't mean it as a bad thing, mind you. You grasp the character designs well. But your sentence structure ruins that. In its goal of explaining things, it has a bad effect of making your readers more confused. If you fix that, I'm sure your book will flourish. It's still in Chapter 2 yet it contains the element of surprise. Hope you write more author! Keep up the good work!

I gotta admit, your story is very interesting. The plot really draws a person in the book. Even with two chapters, I can easily say your story has potential! I hope you continue the story! I'll be looking forward to it!

The story was still on its early stage and it has more room to grow! With the current talent of the Author, her writings will become more awesome! The narration was easy to read and the flow of the sentences didn't stutter a bit. Good luck author and congrats on your novel. The future is bright ahead so I wish you best of luck!

Love the start to this book. It really does build up the tension to the story and would like to see what occurs after the first chapter. Good luck at your writing!

Wow... I love this novel it's so amazing am so thrilled. The plot and the story is so amazing. OMG... words can't explain how am so obsessed with this story

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