Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword

Here's the author doing a review of this already finished novel. I started writing this novel as my first time truly writing in English to improve it. The grammar and phrase construction is lacking at first, but as the novel advances, I improved in it, Grammarly was a great help. For the Stability of the updates, I finished writing 256 chapters after 10 months, almost a chapter for day as average. Is already finished so there's nothing much to say. About the story, at first it start with a lax and infantil writing, with a very crude English. The story being written day by day without, always changing what I had thought. This causes some plot holes over the novel that I closed maybe a little forcefully over the novel. What most people complained was about the loss of memory. Yes, there was and in chapter forty-something is explained the why. Read it thinking that he has no memories of the novel after his first ring. People also complained about his style that was control-defense, but why? With a team is a good style, being able to control the team, letting the others finish them. Then as the story advances, entering more the solo player mode, his style changes. Summarizing, I liked to write this story even facing against the hate. It starts a little poor and I am not too proud of it, only considering it as the improvement of the later parts. But, I am proud of the end, really liking how it finished. If you like OP characters that goes facepalming everyone, because it didn't matter anything because they are OP and untouchable, this isn't your novel. He grows stronger than his age, faving greater enemies but always with that might lose.

What the **** is happening in the story in the start it clearly said he knew what world he is in and he know it but in the middle of the story he didnt know renxue and didnt know the others its more like he got amnesia and for those whi gave 5 star they are just hyping the story saying its good this and that but they forgot the background story of the MC the MC is an avid reader who read alot in his spare time even walking and only stop when he is in roadside so to avoid danger... But the **** i thought the MC is a illigimte child he looks like grandpa sword instead of clan master ning did he get ntred he must be look like either her mother or father not someone who unrelated to their family .... And it clearly said he knew he is in soul land and he still and always do something stupid like how the **** he say they need some good connection for their family to flourish but completely forgot the op omc of the story and go around socialicing in idiots.... Its ok for him to go to the empire school but he completely forgotten the danger of future that awaits for a 100 thousand year old beast so instead of propagating the and queen somjust and must hide her ......IM SURE THE MC GOT AMNESIA WHEN HE FINISH HIS TRAINING IN FOREST AND EAT THE POTATO HE THE MC AND THE AUTHOR BRAIN BECOME POTATO TOO FUCK ENGLISH IM A FILIPINO SO THATS WHY I DONT HAVE A GOOD GRAMMAR

Was a good novel until the author made the mc a woos who shares his Oreos with everyone, lost his previous life’s memories, and their team depended more on meiyi than him he also becomes less talented than his sister due to immortal herbs coming out of tang sans ass