Reviews of Domination Kingdoms
Domination Kingdoms
RenShiYuan
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
A good novel based on MC's rebirth in past and his endeavors to create his own empire. Can someone share the name of original novel or raws to check out............
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Hello reader. I decided to write my first serious review. Let's start: Writing quality: The quality is not that good, there are mistakes, but it's readable in my opinion. The author also improved a bit. Stability of updating: Around 2 chapters/day. It's very good in my opinion. Also these are not 1000 word chapters. Around 1500-2000 Story development: Very good, but a little fast in my opinion. I can follow everything just perfectly. Character design: Not good sadly. Almost every character has the same personality. You can still distinguish good and bad characters which is good. Luckily, this type of novel doesn't need too much "personlity". The story is still enjoyable. Adding personalites is not a necessity here. World background: Huh it's a bit hard to describe. The author didn't do too much. The novel is focused on business rather than the world itself. We don't need detailed world describing here which is good. However, you can still imagine since it's not a novel about another world. Story takes place in 1980's and probably the years after that. Personal opinion: I like this novel very much. I can see that the author understands his own novel. The novel is about business, but you will understand it even if you don't know anything about business. Grammar don't affect me too much. I can read it without problems. I hope the author will add some slice of life scenes. I like slice of life :) I will rate this novel 5/5 based on personal opinion, but I think it's only worth 4/5 because of the not so good grammar. I hope this review helped you. 2020.08.02, chapter 34
Guys this author might have been lying to us all of time because I just found a novel called 硅谷大帝 (silicon valley) with over 700+ chapters that is just way too similar. I still give a five star because I'm giving him the benefit of the doubt since he has been responding to comments like he is the author but it is pretty suspicious to me the he doesn't use the same username.
This the novel out there in its genre as most of them are korean in which it a 1D story either revenge on a rich influential family or money (the country is so small in the first place no matter what u do in that place ur standing in th world is only a rich guy it's like a rich man from village came to city) Or we have the Chinese ones where it's all about chasing girls and fight the young masters who also want her and then thier families (then it keeps on repeating like first in a city then fight ones in state and in last the ones in capital) But here there is no such f ucking plot it's very likable And the small seeds of romance r sowen very degilently overall this one is a new fresh novel and the author also has a good grasp at the overall look of the story progression
After reading other genre this business building is very refreshing. I've read God of Money, 12 hours after etc and it's a good novel to read. Needs editing specifically with the pronoun usage. But, hey it wasn't in English in the first place it was translated. Anyway this is a good story and should be read by a lot of people! 😁
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It's to fast paced to make it a decent story Opening was great as well as relating similarities between Harry Potter and himself. If you continued that for 20/30 chapters of his daily life it would make an impression. Then introducing his grandfather as having worked in a bookshop in his youth before receiving it when the owner retired would make more of an impact. Having major player in technology be a neighbour is weak, could have had it that he bought his first book on computers within that store and regularly visited due to his sentimentality
