Review Detail of WriterSovereign in Domination Kingdoms

Hello reader. I decided to write my first serious review. Let's start: Writing quality: The quality is not that good, there are mistakes, but it's readable in my opinion. The author also improved a bit. Stability of updating: Around 2 chapters/day. It's very good in my opinion. Also these are not 1000 word chapters. Around 1500-2000 Story development: Very good, but a little fast in my opinion. I can follow everything just perfectly. Character design: Not good sadly. Almost every character has the same personality. You can still distinguish good and bad characters which is good. Luckily, this type of novel doesn't need too much "personlity". The story is still enjoyable. Adding personalites is not a necessity here. World background: Huh it's a bit hard to describe. The author didn't do too much. The novel is focused on business rather than the world itself. We don't need detailed world describing here which is good. However, you can still imagine since it's not a novel about another world. Story takes place in 1980's and probably the years after that. Personal opinion: I like this novel very much. I can see that the author understands his own novel. The novel is about business, but you will understand it even if you don't know anything about business. Grammar don't affect me too much. I can read it without problems. I hope the author will add some slice of life scenes. I like slice of life :) I will rate this novel 5/5 based on personal opinion, but I think it's only worth 4/5 because of the not so good grammar. I hope this review helped you. 2020.08.02, chapter 34