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Those poor horses
Ngl, I always enjoy how this platform is impeccably based
Lmao, getting the “ma’am, this is a Wendy’s” vibe
I actually quite like the writing quality, whether it was completely done with AI or not. I was pretty excited for the first couple of chapters, I wanted to see what you would do with this advanced tech fic. I was think you could do some interesting things, but the entire system is just a plot device to manufacture dry and uninspired drama with every woman on the show.
Usually I really don’t like events like this in my fiction, but, honestly, there was really no other option. The dude was accelerating his progress exponentially, and with Rubedo, he’d probably be forming a galactic empire by chapter 120. Though, I don’t have an issue with the any of the events except for the “how” he got into this whole situation. Couldn’t you have made it to where this was like a cosmic level assassination attempt? Like, someone capable of dimensional travel pushed him into the Dark Dimension instead of him making a mistake that resulted in his displacement? Could’ve been the start of a cool revenge arc possibly.
Bruh, literally wearing a witch hat and a giant skull pauldron. Who’s the heretic again?
Tell me about it lol.
Tftc