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Oooh what's this alter ego Naruto FF huh...just don't make him an emotional, brooding kid

Read till here..One thing I want to say is the dialogues..they r too simplistic and does not feel natural..u can use a bit of ai to improve it ig

Ofc it's a good start...but the thing is greek mytho FF are so used up at this stage that anything we read feels just another washed up version (no offense)

Ah yes ofc it's me giving this novel it's well deserved rating...well to say in short it's a story which can be read by anyone and gives u a glimpse to one of the oldest mythologies....SO YEAH ITS WORTH UR TIME... instead of those trash greek ones read this

Their only moving up and down again and again 😂

👀 blessed r u to fall in my eyes ur new start...also a unique start not many ff have

I meant indra as in the mc...also it's intro think that idea usually portrayed as an ingnorant fool to have the most hymns in vedas

Was that rishized an attempt to twist in rizzed and rishis...or a simple typo 😂

Oh gawd...Indra trying to wing it to reaching vedic approval 🤣

Exactly my brother 😂