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Listen man...idk who told u to rush this EFL arc but it's not necessary...infact it's actually better...helps to bring a certain sense of realism....or else I have football ff showing 16-17 yr guy playing for UCL and destroying everybody 💀...so yeah ur progression is good and realistic and helps to connect better.

Man I think u should remove the part where it says he continues on with wenger in the synopsis...or else there's no more surprise and no use to show other coaches pov..we already know who he will end up with

Yeah exactly it's a typo actually...in original it's simple fake overs dribblers

Man thanks a lot for bringing back this story...was so sad when the previous one was not continued

Oooh what's this alter ego Naruto FF huh...just don't make him an emotional, brooding kid

Read till here..One thing I want to say is the dialogues..they r too simplistic and does not feel natural..u can use a bit of ai to improve it ig

Ofc it's a good start...but the thing is greek mytho FF are so used up at this stage that anything we read feels just another washed up version (no offense)

Ah yes ofc it's me giving this novel it's well deserved rating...well to say in short it's a story which can be read by anyone and gives u a glimpse to one of the oldest mythologies....SO YEAH ITS WORTH UR TIME... instead of those trash greek ones read this

Their only moving up and down again and again 😂

👀 blessed r u to fall in my eyes ur new start...also a unique start not many ff have