Reviews of Delited 5443

Hello everyone, Author here! I just wanted to say that this is my first book and so please don't mind the spelling mistakes; English isn't my first language

I feel terribly ashamed when I read the author's work compared to mine. 😭 This is what an exemplary novel is but it was still basic. You know what I mean? It means I am still far behind and so so. Nice narration and fluency on its finest. A very delightful read to the readers. Kudos and out. ✌️

I highly recommend this book. It is amazing and i only wish there were more chapters. The author does a very good job with describing every scene and every character. The story line is really good too. I'm adding this to my collection, please update soon

Overall, it's a really interesting story that draws the reader in. I like how the world was built and how the beginning started, also the mystery around the kids is really really interesting. I would recommend putting on a Mystery tag because it really does seem a lot more like mystery, more so about finding something out that just running around doing things. The grammar is understandable but it is worth it to look at some of the more major mistakes. 1. The tense, as someone (forgot who) said before, the tenses change quite a bit. It happens more frequently at first, but sort of mellows off, which is good, but it might come up again. The most frequent changes are from present to past in the span of a sentence, which isn't good, but also isn't deathly serious in my opinion since verb tenses are annoying. Just watch out for stuff like: [I watched the plates. I dry them] It doesn't get to a degree of no-one-can-understand-this, but it might grate some nerves. 2. The placement of some things in sentence are a bit awkward. Like ummm "... he wore casual clothes consisted of a grey hoody..." I think this might be a verb issue, but it could also be: [... he wore casual clothes that consisted of a grey hoody...] It's the order or just the placement of somethings that affect the writing. It's not really hard to read, but it affects the overall flow and makes it a bit awkward to read. 3. Sometimes, I see this quite a lot, but with these things [...] there's supposed to be a space after them at the beginning of a quotation. I think? At least, every time I type into Microsoft, they change it. So: ["...I used to like dogs."] is, I think not okay? ["... I used to like dogs."] is okay? It might not be an issue, but I think it might be...? 60% sure. NOT AT THE END THOUGH... IF IT'S AT THE END IT'S FINE... I think. Other than that, and what I think might be typos (? probably), there's also Hokkaido. It's Hokkaido. Idk why that screams at me. Idk if that's a typo, but it's Hokkaido. Anyway, it's good and I reallllly liked (this time I'll remember to save it in my library instead of going to history to find it OvO) the relationships between the characters. I also loved the world building, and I'd say out of everything, it's the world building that really hits it.

Very good character and world-building for certain. There are some minor grammar mistakes, but the author said himself that English isn't his first language, so he is forgiven due to the Story being on another level. Well, just keep doing your best Michael😆

The question of what exactly is happening around the main character is really intriguing, as the chapter will progress I will be looking forward to see what exactly is this mystery. The moments shared between characters are something that fills my heart and tbh I often find myself being like "A***" as Elias and Shin are together. And it's well written, I could easily visualize everything as the scenes roll in. And the author had done a phenomenon job with the narration. I am super excited to read the upcoming chapters

Now, that chapter was great! I really enjoyed it and I am waiting for your next chapter, which says released on 28th, but still, I'm waiting ... All the best for your book, hope you upload it in a continuous fashion. [img=recommend]

WOW! Great novel. Every chapter throws me for a loop. I think I know whats happening one minute, then surprise, it's a plot twist. The use of humor also makes the novel a nice light read. The creativity and well written story, really makes it special. Thanks, and keep up the good word Author![img=recommend]

For somebody who doesn't have English as a first language this is impressive. There aren't too many errors or at least I didn't make many out. Would recommend you write up a few more chapters and then release them daily to get your viewer numbers up! Good luck!

Very nice read author! Thank you for this... I really enjoyed it. The grammar was perfect and the lines flowed fluently, which made me read it very smoothly without annoying hiccups. It was a very long prologue btw :D But I didn't even mind because it was very interesting nonetheless. I will add your story to my reading list and am curious to see if you can keep it up!

There is some nice action here, and the budding romance comes on quickly to pull you in. The world could stand to have some fleshing out and the writing could be a little crisper, but in all, a fine tale.

This is one of the most heart warming book I ever read. The question of what exactly is happening around the main character is really intriguing, as the chapter will progress I will be looking forward to see what exactly is this mystery. The moments shared between characters are something that fills my heart and tbh I often find myself being like "A***" as Elias and Shin are together. And it's well written, I could easily visualize everything as the scenes roll in. And the author had done a phenomenon job with the narration. I am super excited to read the upcoming chapters[