Despite only seven chapters being out so far I still wanted to support the author by giving reviewing it since I have high hopes for this novel and really hope he will continue writing it. Love the ideas you have for this novel and respect that you dare to try and create something new. Especially since I get how you feel with all the copy paste cliches in other novels, it irritates me a lot as well and it is getting way out of hand on this side. So I really hope you can make this work and continue to write your novel, thank you for the effort! I will keep a close tab on this and support you when I can!

Very nice read author! Thank you for this... I really enjoyed it. The grammar was perfect and the lines flowed fluently, which made me read it very smoothly without annoying hiccups. It was a very long prologue btw :D But I didn't even mind because it was very interesting nonetheless. I will add your story to my reading list and am curious to see if you can keep it up!

Hahaha, thanks for the kind words! I'll promise I will do my best on the R18 chapters! Something tells me I'm sure you're going to like those!

What up party people! 6 chapters out by now! Keep m coming! Hope you guys can be patient for a little longer because....R-18 chapters are coming very soon now! ;-)

You're welcome! Hope you enjoyed it :-)

I think the content of the story is very interesting, the setting is very nice! The grammar and punctuations though need some work. I would suggest letting someone edit this as the story would come out a lot better if this issue gets solved. I would use the program grammar as well, I use it myself too. It does wonders! And like someone else commented, read your phrases out loud, that works great for me as well! You can see in your work that you really like writing! I would say, keep it up! It's always good to do something you love! Cheers!

Thank you for reading and especially reviewing it! I Really appreciate it... 4th chapter is coming out any moment now, finishing the details as we speak! Hope you stay on board, glad to have you here!

In all honesty, I'm seriously surprised this novel is this good. The synopsis lacked a little quality in my opinion, I would advise you to put that on the same standard as the novel itself because it doesn't do it justice! It's not bad, don't get me wrong, the novel is just that good imho! As an ******* writer, I learned a lot from the way you described your characters. I had no trouble at all creating an image of Aurora for example, including her personality. It was woven through the lines in a very intelligent way. I will keep following your novel, very curious where it's going to! Keep it up, I think you are definitely born to write! Btw, this is a genuinely honest opinion!

Yes, I totally agree!

Thanks for the honest review! Really appreciate it, and glad it made you laugh as well haha. . It is indeed intended as a novel that invokes positive emotions and makes you feel good while reading it. The sect is pretty different from normal sects yes, it's a female-only man-hating sect :D Their members have been wanted and lusted after throughout the world for thousands of years. Of course, this isn't really as in the normal world, some of those females would have been married to males, etc. But I try to add some comedy with this as they represent female emancipation of the cultivator world in this story. When we're a bit further ahead though, it will have tournaments and war where people get seriously wounded and or killed, sometimes in the most gruesome ways. So it won't be all light stuff, it just that the beginning is peaceful... But nothing bad will happen to the characters the readers tend to get emotionally invested in, it stays a feel-good story at its core.

Thanks mate! Glad you enjoyed it!

Yes that is the right attitude! You should let no one stop you from doing what you like to do! Keep it up!

Nice work author! I had fun reading it... you're especially good and making the reader visualize the story by describing many details throughout the story! There are some minor grammatical mistakes but those are not enough to bother me, and since you're not a native English speakers (like me) it's very understandable and I'm sure you will improve on that in the future! The only tip I would give is that I would name the chapters a little more inviting to read, the chapter names can be a little boring to some! Anyway keep up the good work! I will keep following your progress! Cheers!