NotBeatrix
This one was really great. Honestly one of the best I've read on the website. I love the kind of... powetic approach you took. (Best word I can think of) It reminds me a lot of books I used to read as a child. Less focusing on the characters or world and more focusing on describing the movement of scenes and characters. You really don't see that on this kind of website. And I really do respect that. When I write, I tend to lean towards character developement, and I know a lot of writers on here focus on creating the same fantasy world over and over. I respect that you decided to just... tell your story. You could've easily picked something that would of gotten you thousands of views, but you instead chose something that represents you and your style of writing. In some ways, I really look up to you as a writer. Keep up the good work!
The Pacing is just right and the quality is of a native speaker. I won't say much but the writings and wordings is even deeper than lord of the rings. It failed to be compared to it. Also, the words are engrossing and the story is enthralling. Keep it up! Hope more readers will read yours [img=recommend]
The Writing was quite a treat. I enjoyed the luxury of the succinct descriptions and very vivid usage of scenery to depict a rather intense image to the reader. Something you don't often find while browsing webnovels is that large "description". The authors smooth writing and transitioning from there only serve to make a comfortable reading experience. I would recommend this novel to anyone really.
Absolutely good. Good plot? Check ✅ Good storyline? Check ✅✅ I really love the setting of the book and the prologue busted my head. Descriptive but not revealing. Such a good write-up. The only thing author needs to watch out for is the update. I saw that the last chapter has been updated since last month.