Review Detail of ObadaE in deleted book12

Thank you! I'm done with yours as well and I couldn't post this in the WN Forums so I'll post it here: Your story was awesome and I was super impressed. The only thing I would say is watch out for scene direction. When were on the veranda which i'm aware is an outside patio (which some other readers may not so include some hints and details like 'the outside patio'), I didn't have a good idea the scale of this patio area or how we went from the door where Eme greeted Uvo to another room. Even though the setting was described I was confused on how the characters were moving within that detailed scene. Other than that, loved it.