emmalmanny
The writing style in this story is far better than the rest of the trash that the Webnovel is filled with. I swear whenever I try to read any story from this app, it's as if I'm reading a recently puberty hit child's rant, instead of a proper narration style. I'm especially glad that this is one those rare stories in which narration style is not completed in just mere dialogues with names preceding them, but properly visualising the scenerio and emotions of the character. Can't wait to see more from this story.
One of the best fanfic on webnovel imo. No room temperature IQ MC, no "got my 3 broken wishes" which are often disappointing, no system making the rest of the world irrelevant, OC with an actual story and being part of the world rather than a bystander with no attachment or purpose etc. Really looking forward what this story will become, only a few days old and already looking great
Can't say much about the story so all 3 Stars as I didn't get past the first chapter. What i can say is 1 Star for quality. This story sadly reads like mtl. Props for lengthy chapters and no word count chapter, but I can't enjoy reading this. I'd suggest grammarly and maybe brushing up on english a bit. I don't need or expect perfect quality in a fanfic, but it should at least be readable without correcting sentences in my head to read. Still i wish the Author all the best and thanks for sharing your story.