Review Detail of Ghost1645 in De Luna

I'm probably not going to read any of this story, but i wanted to explain why, the Grammer in this story along with the the writing is great, but its been put through google translate or something, if the author reads this then I'd recommend you put this through the Gramerly app(not sure if that's the correct spelling) or ask someone to proof read your story and repost it. In layman's terms you get your point and meaning across but are likely losing potential readers over aesthetics, rant over, you may continue with your day😁